Needed more originality
Having done research on the Pamela Smart case this was inspired by, I would've appreciated it more if it wasn't so beat-by-beat similar!
The way Suzanne seduces Jimmy and sends Lydia away to walk the dog, and she later catches the two having sex = Pamela sneaked Billy upstairs, leaving Cecilia downstairs, continuing to watch 9 & 1/2 Weeks, later walking in on the two.
The dog being named after a journalist = Pamela & Gregg also owned a dog, named after a rock star.
"Do you think about me when I'm not around?" = Pamela did ask Billy this, and he said yes; she also claimed that Gregg hit her
"God forgive me" = Billy said this just before shooting Gregg
The way the boys jumped Gregg, had him offering them his money and begging for mercy, and killed was just like in the movie.
Cecilia was also wired with a recording device by the police, and in the tapes, Pamela suggested that they both stay quiet about the murder.
Could the author (Joyce Maynard) seriously not come up with her own ideas?! While The Exorcist, Psycho, and The Girls were inspired by real-life cases, at least the authors had created their own characters with their own backstories, and have the story & setting of it be quite different from the real ones!
This felt more like a parody of the Pamela Smart case!