A New Visionaries Story


OK, it's taken me ages, but I've finally completed "Shape Of The Mind" - the rewrite! I'm going to be putting it up online once a friend has proof-read it for me. Watch this space.

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I suppose you've written a really long script since several months have already past and still nothing on this "space". How many more months does your friend need to proof-read it?

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That's what I'd like to know! Actually another friend has proof-read it in the mean-time. Ignoring the sarcasm, most of her comments are pretty useful and I will be tweaking it accordingly. The friend who originally volunteered has got in touch with me on it this week, actually, and hopefully she'll be giving me her full feedback soon!

I myself am really sorry about the delay, I will put it up online as soon as the tweaks are sorted!

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As the wait is getting ridiculous, I am going to upload the draft that is awaiting corrections (draft 2), and then re-upload it when draft 3 gets written. And this proof-reader is soon going to be in AGONY, I promise you.

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LiamABC: As the wait is getting ridiculous, I am going to upload the draft that is awaiting corrections (draft 2), and then re-upload it when draft 3 gets written. And this proof-reader is soon going to be in AGONY, I promise you.


Thanx for the update. Any news about this project of your? Apparently, this thread is almost 4 years since its conception and there has not been any public manifestation of your work. I sincerely hope that you release the latest revision, albeit draft, soon because I really want to get my hands on anything about Visionaries

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