My Main Criticism of TNG is......


I'm watching Star Trek TNG for the first time, and I'm midway through season 3.
I love the show, but my main criticism is that it's almost entirely made up of standalone episodes, versus story arcs that extend over many episodes. Both approaches to storytelling have their own strengths and weaknesses.

Having standalone episodes allows for far more stories to be told, so the diversity is really appealing. Some stories don't need multiple episodes to be told, so the standalone format is perfect for them. But the problem comes with stories that DO need multiple episodes, but are only given ONE. The end up feeling rushed and shallow, with so much glossed over, all so that it can come to a tidy conclusion by the end of the episode. It feels so unsatisfying sometimes.

Longer story arcs spanning multiple episodes really draw you into the show, and gives a sense of gravity to the events that occur because you've watched them step-by-step as they've progressed. The drawback to longer story arcs is that (depending on the show) writers can get carried away with their imagination (anyone remember that tv show "Lost" LOL). So it sometimes just drags on and on, until you no longer care about how it ends.

I believe hybrid formats are great. You get the best of both worlds. Longer satisfying story arcs, as well as numerous self-contained smaller stories.

What really frustrated me today is I watched Star Trek TNG Season 3 Episode 16 "The Offspring" for the first time. Data creates a daughter named Lal, and we see him help her take her first steps into sentience and personhood. Almost as soon as her journey starts, it's already over! Her neural-net brain gets overloaded and fried from emotional processing spontaneously occurring. I was so disappointed to see this, I felt sad for Data, and sad to know that this is probably the last of this particular story, that's just the way this show works. I'm guessing there won't be another where he continues the experiment, this was it. And it's such a shame, because this opened up so much new territory for Data's journey. But they just had to tie it all together into a neat conclusion by the end of the 45 minutes.

Just wanted to see what other people think about all of this.

What are some standalone episodes that you guys really wanted extended and covered more in depth?

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Keep watching until the end of season 3

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As it was a syndicated show a requirement was that a network could air an episode whenever they wanted.

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Good point. More depth to some of these stories might have been just what the series needed. The weekly adventure thing got a little old after a while. All they did was just explore, explore, explore and never really progressed to any purpose. It's intriguing to have a quest or mystery unfold over a whole series. But it is a tricky business. Lost had that going for a long time but in the end it didn't really pay off. The X-files had it too but in a more hybrid fashion, so even though the unfolding mystery kind of petered out near the end we still had great stand-alone episodes all along. Then there is the problem of having to watch in sequence, which is hard enough to do now but was much harder to do before the days of DVRs/streaming/on-demand etc.

There was a bit of it - a few two part episodes, the recurring involvement of Q, the Borg, Data's quest to be more human culminating in the emotion chip, and maybe a few more if I thought longer. You are just on season 3 so you might feel a little differently after watching the entire series but on the whole I think the lack of this was a significant limitation on the masterful storytelling ability the creators clearly possessed.

OTOH we did have the feature-length motion pictures and although I enjoyed them I felt TNG was stretched a bit thin to fill it all up. So maybe 'superficial' was the best you could do with it?

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Well, what you're experiencing with this show is indicative of the problems mainly coming from Gene himself, at the same time applied to the nature of Star Trek in general. TOS was meant to be like Wagon Train to the Stars, in which each episode was meant to be self-contained, that if you were a new viewer you didn't need to watch the very first episode to get acquainted with everything and understand what's going on, utilizing both dialogue and the visual language of cinema to communicate with the audience.

TNG was meant to be applied in the same way, but things were very different for Star Trek as a franchise. Trek had become a cult following and that had spawned four feature films by this point, and finally Paramount decided to go with a new TV series, and Gene Roddenberry was not going to let that go by without his control. He had been, by and large, out of the halls of power in Hollywood for some time, and he was desperate to get back into the swing of things, and to present his vision of Star Trek this time with as little input from the studio execs as possible.

But he was in failing health, heavily addicted to drugs and alcohol on a daily basis, and it showed in his writing and conceptualizing. Normally, most TV shows and movies have more than a sentence or two describing who and what the characters are, but with the TNG crew, most of it was either just a few words or even just one word. Data: Android, emotionless, Pinnochio. Or, Worf: Klingon. You can imagine how tough it can be for writers to write for such characters if even the creator doesn't know what kind of people they are.

Further, Gene was under the rubric that after 80 years since Kirk and Spock, mankind would evolve beyond fundamental disagreements the way those characters had. So he banned all internal conflict from the main cast; meaning that you weren't going to have characters come to loggerheads the way Bones and Spock routinely did in TOS. This severely hampers writers' abilities to create compelling drama, making it all come from outside the cast rather than anything from within.

If it weren't for TOS' success prior, if it hadn't ever existed, TNG would never have made it past its pilot. It took three seasons for the show to really find its footing, and by then Gene had gone, and died shortly after he left, and they went through a couple of other executive producers before settling on Michael Piller and Rick Berman, who were able to take the show in a direction, and even sneak in some internal conflict here and there.

My biggest gripe about the show is that it accidentally stumbled on what would've been the greatest sci-fi story arc ever in television, and they didn't see it. Maybe they were too busy, given the pressure to put on 26 episodes a season. But what they showed was a Federation that had gotten so comfortable that Starfleet no longer considered itself a military, and started building their ships for luxury and comfort for long voyages rather than for potential warfare. This is a sign of civilizational decay, one of the chief reasons why civilizations fall; sometimes, people get so comfortable that they no longer feel a duty to their nation and its protection that they cede such duties over to the state, so that they can live lives of abject pleasure without worrying about whatever may lurk out in the frontiers.

But they don't see that, and in spite of catastrophe after disaster after huge catastrophe, nothing much ever changes, if anything at all. What they should've done is have the characters examine their own beliefs about their culture to see if they're seeing reality as it is, not as they'd like it to be. After the Yamato Disaster in Contagion, they should've been asking whether or not it's a good idea to have families residing on ship's meant to go into harm's way. After the Borg, they should've really considered maybe that Starfleet's belief that it's not a military might be hampering their ability to adequately defend the Federation. This would be a huge source of internal conflict and drama setting the tone throughout the series that, if done right, could've catapulted TNG into legendary heights. But, alas, we didn't get that story.

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TNG is legendary, Wylde.

RIP Gene Wilder. RIP Robert Vaughn. RIP Carrie Fisher. RIP William Christopher. 2016 is the worst!

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One real problem with the Galaxy-Class ships was that according to what I have read, they being so large and complex they end up taking roughly 20 years to build.

In terms of new hull materials and just technological improvements in general, twenty years seems an awfully long time. I think you would risk the danger of the ships being somewhat obsolete before they were even launched.

An aircraft carrier takes about four to five years to build which is not too bad. I would imagine the smallish Defiant-class ships would probably take about six months to build.

The Prometheus-class warships could probably be built in five years or thereabouts.

The smaller ships have an advantage in that you could construct them in a lot more facilities. That would be advantageous in a time of all-out war where your larger construction facilities may have been damaged by enemy forces.

It could be that life on Earth had gotten so easy and laid back that the only way to attract people to join Starfleet voluntarily was to make the ships downright comfy and luxurious compared to how they use to be. That's not saying too much for Gene Roddenberry's vision.

You know about ten years ago I came home from work and found my neighbor's dog in my yard at my fence which separates my yard from my neighbor's yard. He was barking and just wanted back inside his yard. I put my work stuff up and then went out to where he was and very carefully lifted him up and put him over the fence. He started to run a bit but then stopped and came back to me and licked my hand as if to say " thank you ".

He then ran to the back porch, drank some water and then laid down and took a real long nap. I think he discovered it was a scary world out there with all those cars and trucks going back and forth and he just wanted to go back to where he knew he was safe.

Being an explorer as a dog, person, or society is not exactly an always safe or comfortable proposition. A lot of times there is danger involved and the perceived rewards are going to have to be greater than the perceived risks.





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Thank you for sharing such an insightful and interesting post.

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I like episodic TV...if you don't like a particular story then there will be a new one next week. But TNG does callback to previous episodes at times. This is perfect for episodic TV. Arcs can get annoying. I used to like 24 but it quickly became tedious. Some shows like BURN NOTICE were good at being episodic with just a little bit of story arc to keep you watching without aggravating the viewer. Plus serialized shows usually don't have a rewatchability factor.

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What you say about serialized shows not being as rewatchable as episodic shows is true. I love serialized shows and ds9 is my favorite ST but when I want to unwind and watch a fun ep, I'll watch the other ST shows. I've rewatched VOY and ENT repeatedly but have only seen the entire DS9 3/4x.

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A series like this imo should always follow in the footsteps of Buffy the Vampire Slayer.

The best seasons always have a good sprinkling of stand alones and serials, multiple part episodes and season long aspects that make a season finale actually satisfying.

Without some kind of serialization, a drama series starts to feel pointless, because whatever character development there is is never brought up again.

Apathy on the rise, no one cares

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Without some kind of serialization, a drama series starts to feel pointless, because whatever character development there is is never brought up again.


I'd disagree being a viewer of both classic Doctor Who and the new series, it worked much better simply stringing 4 x 20 minute episodes together than it does now where they are attempting to tie episodes into an end of season overly convoluted plot that leaves many people asking what the hell they've just seen.

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Agree to disagree I suppose.

I find a series far more frustrating when there isn't something I can latch onto as 'important' and continuing.

It's why I prefer DS9 over TNG. Things have far more weight when you can see four other episodes int he season leading up to it.



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It's not like in TNG that each episode they were all getting acquainted with each other because they forgot everything from each episode. There have been plenty of times that previous episodes have affected the future ones. So it's not totally disjointed but to b able to pick an episode at random to watch is fine by me. A self contained story or "adventure" on the Enterprise D.

I remember watching it when it first ran and it was very satisfying. Even though I liked THE BEST OF BOTH WORLDS that cliffhanger was like an eternity over the summer. That's a reason I don't like THE EMPIRE STRIKES BACK better than STAR WARS.

Sure...now when you can binge watch it's fine but a long time ago it was very annoying and I satisfying for me.

I liked the reimagining of BATTLESTAR GALACTICA but after awhile I knew the writers were lying and there was no PLAN and I wanted it to hurry up and end after the second season. A lot of serialized stuff is just filler like BREAKING BAD could have told the whole story in 3 seasons or less. Maybe I'm an episodic or limited series person.

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And those are usually the best TNG episodes, where there is a degree of serialization, which is what I'd say proves my point more than anything.

A healthy mix is what's best - like I mentioned, I use Buffy as the best example.

A season long story that built to a good climax, with plenty of standalone episodes but also a good mix of 'main plot' that made it feel like a more cohesive world. Some villains don't just get packed away at the end of an episode and some things affect everything going forward.

So long as you've got a good recap at the start 



Something like BG or Breaking Bad I can agree with though, because their entire plot hinged on a certain... time limit. There was always only so long each of those plots could go on for without getting tired.

Whereas something more broad like 'adventures in space' or 'fighting monsters' gives you lots of scope.



Not for everyone true, but that's why it's my preference 



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I read somewhere that TV series having one long over arcing story line is due at least in part to the rise in popularity of binge watching - people who sit down on a weekend and catch up on the 5 episodes of their favourite program they have sitting unwatched on their PVR. It's also why services like Netflix will produce and release most of or an entire season of a show at once made with one long story arc. It seems when it's one story over many episodes, the show tends to be more popular and makes for easier binge watching.

Not to imply that the continuous story line is new. The X-Files had both what I think the producers called "Myth building" episodes (that related to a continuous story line) and stand alone episodes. And as far as Star Trek goes, DS9 in its later seasons adopted more of a continuous story line structure with the Dominion War episodes.

I have a brain and good taste, so no, I'm not part of the target demographic.

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Why is that guy mentioning, Buffy? Yuck. No comparison to TNG. Might as well have just brought up Gilmore Girls. Lol.

RIP Gene Wilder. RIP Robert Vaughn. RIP Carrie Fisher. RIP William Christopher. 2016 is the worst!

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Have you seen Buffy? It is a very good show and far better than GG. Why are you so biased against it?

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Well my criticism was the techno-babble. "If we can switch the conduits to the main circuit fryer and establish a link between the neuro-networks, we can survive!" but I guess if someone from the future came to the present to explain technology or technicalities about using a machine, it'd sound just as ridiculous. Also the deus-ex-machina ending. Sometimes the episode just rigs it against the Enterprise's favor yet the Enterprise makes it out due to one minor floonky dink

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Still the best Trek.

RIP Gene Wilder. RIP Robert Vaughn. RIP Carrie Fisher. RIP William Christopher. 2016 is the worst!

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The techno-babble is what makes the show great.
You can't have anything like it on most other shows.
I love how they can completely solve any conundrum with techno-babble.


No world order that elevates one nation or group of people over another will succeed

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I agree about the technobabble. I don't mind when someone ask, "What's that?" and someone explains that it's nuero-reverse-pulse-phase-inverting-oscillator, but it kills me when techno-babble is used to magically solve problems. Captain, if we could reverse the field intensity in the electro-quatam containment field it might reverse the polarity of the phase-shifting ions and create an unstable space-time anomaly that will knock out their shields for a few seconds...."Make it so."

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Make it so.

And then it just works. Every time. Apparently Murphy's Law is rescinded in the future.

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" Make It So " is another way of the captain saying " I didn't understand a damned word you just said and I have no fuc#ing idea what the h#ll you are talking about but I / We are really desperate so go ahead ".

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" Make It So " is another way of the captain saying " I didn't understand a damned word you just said and I have no fuc#ing idea what the h#ll you are talking about but I / We are really desperate so go ahead ".

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Exactly. He has no idea what the hell they said, much less what it means, so he just says, "Make it so."
At least he doesn't have Troi telling every one, " just do it.He has no idea what you said." " giggle giggle"

No world order that elevates one nation or group of people over another will succeed

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That's why I always chuckle when watching Galaxy Quest when Tim allen says "Let's do what he says" makes me think of Picard somehow. 

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I love that movie. Such an underrated gem.

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LOL. That's true, but I'd never thought about it before.

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To solve problems in like a minute with techno-babble is rather lame, but TNG is awesome either way.

RIP Gene Wilder. RIP Robert Vaughn. RIP Carrie Fisher. RIP William Christopher. 2016 is the worst!

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