Actually, I'm revising it for the second time--but anyway, I just thought I'd say that my alternate ending will end up on Fanfiction.net shortly. I won't give too much away, but let me give you a hint on what happens: Christopher lives (DUH!). Now it's up to you to figure out the rest of the story...once it's up, of course. XP
Long live The Great Mouse Detective!
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Oh no, you really think Christopher should live? I wish he didn't die too, but wouldn't it take the dramatic weight out of the ending?
Christopher lives and he and Tricky are banned from all the upper class parties in the area, so they open their own pizza delivery service in the South of France to meet hot, lonely co-eds who need help with their math exams. The co-eds get mad though when they start flunking their tests and realize Christopher and Tricky don't know *beep* about math!
or maybe not, lol http://www.amazon.com/Horror-Rock-Stories-Hendrix-ebook/dp/B004HFRKLG