Oh my God is this movie awful! (spoilers)
I really like Goldie Hawn, and two of my favorite comedies of all-time are Overboard and Housesitter. But Private Benjamin is so bad. Here's a list of reasons why.
1) The writers couldn't decide if they wanted to make a movie about a rich princess in the military or a failed romance. It's like two terrible scripts got spliced together to make one steaming turd.
2) I get that it's a comedy, and some things are exaggerated for the sake of humor; but there are too many parts that are not realistic, and these parts have nothing to do with the so-called humor. For example, Judy left the military as if it were no big deal. Getting separated from the military is no easy task. It usually requires a medical reason (physical or psychological). No military commander would tell a private, "You've gotta pick, the military or your Communist boyfriend."
3) The ending is so bad. Judy walks out of the wedding and the credits roll. Where's the resolution? We just spent 2 hours watching this movie, only to see her quit her career in the military and then walk out of her wedding. All this time, and she ends us alone and unemployed. What's the point?
4) There were no likeable characters in the movie, except for maybe Judy. Her friends in the military had about two lines each, so we never really got to know them. Her father was a jerk; her husband and later fiance were both jerks; her drill instructor was a jerk; the other captain was banging the star recruit; her commander in the Thornbirds tried to rape her, her maid was banging her fiance, etc etc etc. Judy is likeable enough, but the rest of the cast is made up of detestable people.
5) The gags were too stupid. The scene with the blue paint in the shower. Has anyone ever gotten into a shower, put their face directly under the nozzle, and then turned the water on? Don't people typically turn the water on and then get in? Or at least feel the water first for temperature? Of course if the drill instructor did any of these rational things, the gag wouldn't have worked. I get it.
6) Everything was predictable. You knew she would go into the military and not fit in, but then somehow she would turn things around and impress her superiors. Wow, shocking.
7) The characters were all 2-dimensional and cliche. You had the poor little rich girl who lived off daddy's wealth who wanted to make it on her own. You had the rich father who didn't want his baby in the military. You had the jerk boyfriend who was sleeping with the maid. You had the anal retentive drill instructor that had it out for the lead character. Um, I think I've seen this movie about 100 times before.
I like older movies, especially older comedies, especially older comedies about the military. Stripes with Bill Murray is one of my favorite movies. Private Benjamin, however, is nothing but bad. Truly pathetic.