Double Review of MAN IN THE WILDERNESS and THE REVENANT

Man, your stuff is unreadable. Ever think of using punctuation? ... Maybe breaking up paragraphs into sentences? Think: Subject (noun). That's a sentence. Don't forget to pair that with Action (verb), and Object (another noun). (You do know what those things are, right?) Then next sentence. It's really not too difficult. Read some books on basic English writing. Then come back in about 20 years.
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I don't have a dog. And furthermore, my dog doesn't bite. And furthermore, you provoked him.

Interesting double review.