Should have been a better story


The fact that he had a rare water well should have been more of a dynamic in the story.It would have been better if someone tried to steal it from him and the girl helped him get it back maybe more cliched but would have been better.

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Did your mom attend Woodstock in the middle of her pregnancy?

"...if that was off, I'd be whoopin' your ass up and down this street." ~ an irate Tarantino

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Nope I just thought it could have been better.

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Okay, then suggest something better; not some stewing kettle of hackneyed $hit.

"...if that was off, I'd be whoopin' your ass up and down this street." ~ an irate Tarantino

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4 years later--the poster is a critic not a writer (assuming all parties are still alive).

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