How I feel this could have been the best Bond film
I really do feel this story had the potential to be the best Bond film, but there are enough missteps along the way to keep it out of the top spot. In my head, there is a perfect version of this movie that:
1. Makes the romance between Bond and Tracey more convincing. I'm open to the idea of a cad like Bond falling in love -- I love the idea, actually. But a sticky sweet montage that takes two people who barely know each other and two minutes later has them in love is not doing to do it. Not in any movie, and definitely not with a character like Bond! Later on, when they meet up again and are escaping from Blofeld, that is the kind of stuff that I feel could make Bond fall in love. But one car chase and a night in a barn isn't enough. There needed to be more of it beforehand, not Louie Armstrong and horse rides. I will confess I'm not sure how they could have done it without making the movie three hours plus, though.
2. Has an additional action scene in the second act. Or should I say, any action scene in the second act. This movie does have loads of action, and most of it is great, but it's poorly distributed. It starts off promising. The fight on the beach, then the fight with the guy in Tracey's room, then a few minutes later Bond knocks some of Draco's goons around for a few seconds before bursting into his office. This all happens in the first twenty minutes. And then... nothing for an entire hour. That's absolutely nuts. Sure, once Bond hits the slopes the action runs on all cylinders for the rest of the movie, but that middle hour really does drag. I read somewhere that they had originally planned on having Hilary's assistant be a Spectre agent, and there was to be some extended scene in which Bond chases after him. That would have been great, and would have split that hour of no action right down the middle.
3. Doesn't dub over Lazenby's voice for half a freaking hour! This is the first guy to try to take over the role. He has no acting experience. He has his work cut out for him. And he's doing... okay. About forty five minutes in, I'm starting to get used to this guy as Bond. And then he's got this goofy dubbed voice and it goes on and on and on. It's hard for us to accept the new guy as Bond when you're only letting him half-play the role!
4. Changed some of the specifics of Bond's time at the clinic. He's supposed to be in love with Tracey at this point, right? Then why is he jumping into bed with every woman he can get his hands on there? I can see him getting together with one of the women, as a way to get more information about what is going on. Keep the scene with him and Ruby in her room, where he finds out they're being hypnotized. But you don't need any more than that. In fact, you could have helped make his love of Tracey more convincing if he had turned down additional advances from the other girls because he feels guilty. Or hell, let him keep knocking boots with everyone he can, as he tries to get more information... but show that he has reservations about doing so.
They also should have changed the way Blofeld discovers he is Bond. I'm not a huge fan of the books, but this is my favorite of the ones I've read, and considering they stuck fairly close to it they really should have stayed faithful to how Bond is discovered. In the book, his ally (the blond guy) is dragged into Blofeld's office while he's meeting with Bond, who is still pretending to be Hilary. The guy is beat up and delirious. He sees Bond and mumbles something like "James help me..." and Blofeld instantly becomes suspicious of Bond, who escapes later in the evening right as Blofeld's goons are coming to his room to apprehend and probably torture him. It's a really cool series of events that builds up the tension better than "Oh Sir Hilary is bed hopping with all these girls and he got this one fact wrong I guess we better whack him on the head and tell him our evil schemes".
5. Is the fifth film in the series. I know that was the original plan, and it's a shame that it didn't happen. It would have made sense that way for Bond and Blofeld to have not recognized each other. And it would have been a neat way to introduce Blofeld, whose face had never been seen before. His character could have been introduced, and if they had done it right we could have genuinely not been sure if he was Blofeld for awhile.
6. Starred Sean Connery. Yes, some people will say that Connery's oversexed thug couldn't have worked in a movie where Bond falls in love. I completely disagree. I think Connery would have sunk his teeth into this. He was bored with the role by the fifth movie, but that was in large part because he thought it was getting silly. If he had seen a script like this, in which his character gets to grow and do something different, I think he would have been totally on board and given it everything he had. And after seeing him go through women like cigarettes for four movies, seeing him fall in love and get married would have had that much more impact. I'm not going to say Lazenby is a complete joke like some people claim, but he really isn't as good as Connery was, and this story was especially not the right time to change leads.