Writing script for "Manos II: the passion of the Torgo"

"The masterrrrr will be pleeeeaased...."
Okay, I now own my own house in the country,and I have a few odd objects, and a grey hat; now,I'm no fertilizer salesman, but I am sure I can't write a worse
script...here's the outline:

It begins with Torgo being resurrected then staggering towards a dark altar in an abandoned town, (there is a training area nearby on the military base with a fake town), and recieving a new 'hand',actually a glove, and returns to the house...he is then entranced by the master, commanding him to return as his servant....there are 3 male college students headed to valley lodge, get lost, etc....but unlike a remake, I want it to be a sort of sequel- there is a power-struggle between torgo and the master, and I plan to include the 'wives' fighting every single time we see them; little debbie is not a little girl, but is the only one not corrupted by manos- she continually warns the students, who never understand what is going on....the twist will be that debbie discovers the secret of manos, destroys the master, becomes the new cult leader and keeps torgo as a sort of 'pet', he sleeps in a dog-bed at her feet, and the 3 students become her husbands....of course, there must be scenes of dumb cops and a couple making out, but I think I could get a runtime of about 60 minutes + or so....release it on youtube.
May take a year or so, but I have the rest of my life...if you are familiar with 'lost skeleton of cadavra' you know what i'm talking about.
What do you think?


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