dark_frances says > I was left with no clear idea about the attitude and feelings of Lily's mother and Julian's older sister, and with a vague feeling that money is supposed to be inherently vile.
I felt I got a good sense of the characters and understood what was going on with each. Lily's mother wasn't the problem, Lily was. She was very naive, insecure, and suspicious. It seemed anyone who was in her life had to devote 100% of their time and attention to her. Otherwise, she was anxious and dissatisfied.
Her mother seemed to be involved with her black chauffeur. There was a lot of town gossip so she may have tried to sneak around. That probably made her daughter all the more suspicious though she was too naive to know why. I don't think Lily's mother paid Julian to marry her daughter but I do think she was happy to have Lily out of the house so she could live her own life. It's not unusual for a parent to give their child and spouse a large monetary gift upon marriage.
Both of Julian's sisters doted on and looked out for him. As his older sisters, it's what they'd done all their lives. As a result Julian grew up being dependent and irresponsible. Knowing they'd be there to bail him out, he took big risks and went through money like there was no tomorrow.
At some point Carrie developed an inappropriate attraction to her brother. She may not have realized what was really behind it but she did everything she could to keep him dependent on her so he'd always come home to them; hopefully, at some point, to stay.
Anna figured out what was driving her sister so she tried hard to keep Carrie in check. Julian, of course, was oblivious to it all. He was out living his life. He just thought he was close with his sisters and they to him. Away from his sisters, especially Carrie, Julian had started to grow up and act like an adult. He got married, was helping an ex, made a lot of money, and tried to take care of others for a change. He was doing fine.
Julian is exhibiting many odd traits that seem unintended - such as manic and manipulative fits which are supposed to pass for enthusiasm and generosity, and a bossy attitude towards his young wife which is supposed to pass for artless manly/fatherly love
Julian's mania had to do with his secret project and the fact he was able to finally do all the things he could never do before for his family. He had every reason to be nervous and excited. Warkins was a dangerous and jealous man who he knew wouldn't appreciate someone swindling him or trying to run off with his wife; as Warkins would have seen it.
It seemed Julian was a rescuer so I'm not surprised he would take interest in Lily or want to marry the child-like, naive, insecure girl. She seemed fine when he was with her. She described how they had spent a lot of time talking and connecting.
many turns of the plot feel manic and brisk, like the several bursts of going on a journey in various directions by various people.
Again, I thought this was Julian trying to connect all the pieces. He knew he had to get Charlotte Warkin out of town so he arranged trips for himself and Lily. The sisters were being sent to Europe because they always hoped to go there. I suspect he wanted them out of town to keep Warkins from going after them to get to him. Once he found out his wife was gone he might put the pieces together and learn that Julian was somehow involved. That's how I interpreted what was going on.
Woman, man! That's the way it should be Tarzan. [Tarzan and his mate]
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