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Horrible summary in IMDB


Who's writing this? Do we have a way to change it?
I mean
"A woman disappears during a Mediterranean boating trip. But during the search, .."
The 'but' is ugly here, wrong syntactically, etc.

How to correct this? Not because I was a grammar-Nazi, but it also implies something that would be wrong.
My suggestion: Just delete it and capitalize 'during'.

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It's not that bad, I'd say it's pretty basic and straigthforward. How would you have it?

''You must have chaos within you to give birth to a dancing star''

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I submitted a fix




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