I think that William Holden and Nancy Olson made a handsome and credible screen couple, and that their performances were quite good. Where things went wrong is in the way Betty's character was presented (IMO, obviously). She was a local gal,a Hollywood native, her family had worked in the movie business for decades, which made her more of a movie insider than Joe, and somewhat his superior in certain matters pertaining to the movie business. I think the romance would have worked better if Betty had herself come to Hollywood, like Joe, from the midwest, Indiana or Illinois to his Ohio, had artistic aspirations, a decent education, tried modeling, acting, gave screenwriting a shot, had a good but not great job with the studio, which would have made her more of s soulmate for Joe, with similar aspirations, which would have made Joe a better guy for her than Artie (some rewriting would be necessary here, needless to say). This would have raised the possibility of a serious, real life alternate scenario, and it would also have lent a more urgent air to the final half hour of the movie. Downside: it would have taken attention away from vampire Norma Desmond, lessened the impact of her tragedy, made Joe's fate even worse than her's. But it would have made the romance more credible.
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