I just read the original story
I just read the original story by Ring Lardner. Very very different. Midge in the story is also very unlikable. He makes Jake LaMotta look like a choir boy. The Kirk Douglas version of Kelly is kind of a jerk at times and you see him change, but the Kelly in the story is a real creep from beginning to end. When Kelly leaves Emma after the shotgun wedding, you can understand why he was mad. In the story he gives her a nice big smack before he leaves. Even leaves her with a bruise. When he leaves his manager Tommy, you disagree, but you can understand his motives in the movie. In the story, he has no real reason. Kelly even abuses his mother and brother in the story. Connie isn't even in the story except for one part in the beginning when Kelly knocks his crippled little brother to the floor and takes his money. The story begins with Kelly being 17. His brother is 14. Emma isn't in the story either. He meets her and actually knocks her up in the story. She ends up having a kid. Lew in the story isn't Emma's father, but her brother. Grace is in the story, but totally boring and not fleshed out at all. She is "expensive" like in the movie and she influences him in the story, but not fleshed out at all. When Kelly leaves her it is almost exactly the same as in the movie. For some reason this is the only bit of dialogue the screenwriters kept in the movie. I guess they really liked it. The ending is very different in the story. The movie keeps one small idea from the ending, but I don't want to give the ending away. I thought Midge Kelly was a scumbag in the Lardner story. He is the only character really fleshed out. Lardner never describes him, but he has the most dialogue and you get to know him more; what he's like, what he's feeling, thinking. If anyone would like to discuss the story, I'd be more than happy to.
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