TITLE CARD: OUR FEATURE PRESENTATION
Old Man Happy was severely pissed. It was the middle of the afternoon, and he couldn't hear the football game on his raggedy, duct-taped prehistoric livingroom TV because of the kids singing outside his window. Old Man Happy lived in a big brick house in the heart of Valentine's Bluffs. The sun was shining outside while a chilly breeze traveled through the town. On nice days like these, all Happy wanted to do was get drunk and watch the game- but those kids wouldn't let him. Happy staggered out of the recliner and grabbed his bat. He opened the livingroom door and saw a dozen teenagers standing in front of his house singing and throwing around a fake rubber pickax.
HAPPY- Get off my lawn, you little blowholes!
TEENS (singing loudly)- Once every year, as the fourteenth draws near, there's a hush all over the town.. For the legend they say, on a Valentine's Day, is a curse that'll live on and on.. And no one will know,as the years come and go, of the horror from long time ago!!!!
The teens bellowed with laughter and threw the toy pickax on Happy's porch.
HAPPY- Get lost, you fu**ckfaces, before I call the cops!
The teens all walked away down the street, disappearing into town. Happy stared at the toy pickax on the ground. A shiver raced down his spine.
HAPPY- Ten years... Happy fu**cking Valentine's Day.
He slugged on his can of beer and walked back inside. He eyed the livingroom clock. He had to go to work at the dive soon. *beep* it, he thought.
HAPPY- I'm old as dirt. I got a damn right to show up to work drunk.
He grabbed the TV remote and switched the channel from the game to cable porn. A busty Blondie bimbo shook her stiff boobs on Happy's television.
HAPPY (laughing)- Love is in the air.
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Mandy could feel her mini-skirt sliding down as she stood up on the ladder, taping down pink and red streamers on the wall. Mandy, an attractive, pale-makeup wearing blonde was wishing she never volunteered for the Valentine's Day Dance Committee.
MANDY- Did I tape these up right, Parker?
Parker, a brown skinned, sultry and sassy best friend of Mandy's was standing at the bottom of the ladder, watching.
PARKER- It looks good enough, Mandy. Why don't you get off the ladder before you give off a peepshow?
MANDY (embarrassed)- Shut up, Parker!
Mandy and Parker were some of the most popular girls at Valentine's Bluffs High. Mandy was bubbly and full of electricity, but her thinking skills weren't energetic at all. Luckily for her, she had Parker, who was a complete smart-ass, but sweet all in the same vein. Mandy climbed down off of the ladder. They were decorating the grand room in the town's City Hall. The room was huge and spacey, and sunlight beamed through the giant windows.
MANDY- So, Park, the dance is tomorrow night. Who are you gonna go with?
PARKER- Mandy, give me a break, alright! You're beginning to sound like my grandma. Parker, get a boyfriend so he can pop your cherry!
MANDY- Hey, I didn't mean it like that, nut!
PARKER- It's funny that you're giving me dating advice, Miss. I Haven't Had A Boyfriend In Six Months Because I'm A Newfound Virgin.
MANDY- I am serious about that! I a made a serious, um, uh, what's that word?
PARKER- Commitment?
MANDY- Yeah, that's the one!
PARKER- You know what, I find it funny that Arash, Liz, Maria and all those guys always give us sh!t for not working hard enough on decorating, yet we're the first ones here.
MANDY- Oh, god, those losers..
PARKER- Mandy, they're actually pretty cool-
MANDY- Yeah they're actually pretty much losers.
PARKER- Mandy, you're not gonna get far in life if you don't hang out with people because they're broke.
MANDY (sarcastic)- Amen, Parker!
PARKER (sighing)- Alright, Mandy.
The main room's doors flew open and in sashayed Tamara, the missing girl of Mandy and Parker's clique. Tamara was ridiculously platinum blonde, fit like no other, gray-eyed and intimidating. She wore what seemed to be the tightest shirt ever created, the tighest pair of short-shorts that could've been bought at the Baby Gap, and pink flip-flops. She threw her designer purse on the table where the decorating boxes were.
PARKER- Where the hell were you?
TAMARA- No, the question isn't where I was, the question is where the hell are the Geek Squad? Shouldn't they have been here by now? Miss Mable and the mayor are gonna show up any minute and those retards are probably off somewhere having gay sex with each other.
PARKER- Honey, do you need a Midol?
TAMARA (smirking, pissed)- Ha ha ha! Parker you're so funny!
PARKER- Tamara, calm down, okay. We're basically finished with our half of the decorating, there's nothing to be mad about.
TAMARA- Sure there is! That botoxed-to-hell woman who calls herself my mother was on my ass this morning. She wants me to spend Valentine's Day with the family and not come to the dance. Whatever, she'll get over it.
Tamara was a cold-hearted snake who only got along with Mandy and Parker and no one else. Her greatest hobby was tearing someone down to make herself look good.
MANDY- Tamara, calm down. The dance is tomorrow.
TAMARA- Yeah, you're right.
Tamara looked at her blood-red painted nails. They shined.
TAMARA - Happy Valentine's, everybody. For whatever the hell it's worth.
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In Town's Square, Mayor Barney and Miss Mable were walking quickly to City Hall. Mayor Barney was frail, feeble old man at the wise age of 70, and Miss Mable, carrying boxes of more decorations, was a grey-haired 58-year-old sweet woman who ran the town's thrift store, where some of the teens worked. They were smiling at the calm weather. Town's Square was riddled with homey shops and small restaurants and of course, City Hall. The whoel square was decorated with red and pink hearts, glitter, streamers and a gargantuan banner hung across two buildings that read "THE 5th ANNUAL VALENTINE'S DAY DANCE".
MAYOR BARNEY- Well, Miss Mable, I have to say you and your Decorating Committee have done one hell of a job!
MISS MABLE- Well, Mayor, it's the first Valentine's dance in ten years so we had to do it right!
At that moment, the Mayor choked on his cigar.
MAYOR (cautious)- Well, Mable, I, uh, think it would be useful for everybody if you, um, played down the fact that this is the first Valentine's day dance in ten years, if you know what I mean-
MABLE (cautious)- Oh, yes, of course, mayor! How could have I had forgotten?
Mable walked faster. The mayor stopped and looked at a sign on a telephone pole. It was an ad for the dance. The whole town was looking forward to it. He puffed on his cigar and a smile arose his face.
MAYOR- It's finally over.. We can finally move on.
The Mayor and Mable walked up the front steps of City Hall. Mable went to open the front doors but all of a sudden, a bloody teenage boy collapsed out of the building, screaming for dear life.
MABLE- OH MY GOD!!
MAYOR- Mable!!!
The boy dropped to the ground. The mayor and Mable were terrified. Then the boy started laughing. The mayor looked and saw who it was.
MAYOR- ARASH STEVENSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Arash knew he was in trouble. He quickly got off of the ground.
ARASH- Uh, sorry Miss Mable and Mayor Barney, I was just playing a good old Valentine's Day joke, that's all-
MAYOR- Get inside! I need to talk to you kids! Now!!
The mayor pushed open the doors and walked right into the grand room in the City Hall. Arash's friends Maria and Luke were dancing to loud ska music bumping from the stereo. Another girl, Liz was sitting down at a table, laughing at them. A boy who seemed to keep to himself, Joseph, was painting a cardboard heart on the table. Tamara, Mandy and Parker sat far away from them, and Tamara looked at them like they were aliens.
MAYOR- What the hell is going on in here, kids!! You're supposed to be decorating for the dance, not decorating each other!!
The kids were surprised. Luke quickly turned off the radio.
LUKE- Sorry, mayor.
Luke was a bisexual art-freak who had a great sense of humor. His mood always reflected in the wardrobe he wore. Maria, Luke's good friend, was very warm-hearted and secure in her own self, meaning she did crazy things all the time and never regretted them. Liz, also a friend of theirs, was one of the smartest girls in school and had a very hopeful, optimistic vibe about her. Arash, Liz, Maria & Luke were best friends and the opposite of the Plastic crew trail blazed by Tamara, Mandy & Parker. Joseph Van den Berg, an overweight, shy and friendly guy who was decorating and not hanging with either group, was seen as the "gentle giant". He was forever tormented by the bullies of the school, which is why he joined the Dance Committee, to see if he could make any friends.
MARIA- Sorry about that, Mayor.
MAYOR- Arash, you nearly scared Mabel to death! What's your damn problem?
ARASH- Miss Mable, I'm so so sorry-
MABLE- It's alright, Arash.
And then there was Arash. The handsome music devotee who ate, slept and breathed music. His personality was over-the-top and loud, and almost everybody in the school found him beyond annoying. But he was as friendly as he wanted to be when he was with his friends.
MAYOR- Kids, the dance is tomorrow night and I don't want no funny business. We have to make sure everything goes as perfect as planned!
LIZ- Don't worry, mayor, we're taking care of it.
MABLE- Well, mayor, I better take off. I gotta get back to the thrift store and Liz, don't forget you have to work tomorrow.
LIZ- I'll be there, Miss Mable.
Mable opened the grand room's doors, left the building and disappeared into Town Square. A honk was heard.
MAYOR- Oh, that's the sheriff waiting for me. Kids, remember what I said and be good!
The mayor left the building and walked outside. The sheriff's jeep was waiting in the parking lot. Sheriff Chewie, rugged man in his 40's, waved for the mayor. As the mayor appraoched the jeep, Maria and Luke came racing out of the building.
MARIA- Mayor!
LUKE- Hang on!
As the mayor got in the the truck, Maria gave him a heart-shaped candy box enclosed in plastic wrapper.
MAYOR- Whoah, what's this?
LUKE- It came earlier for you today. It doesn't say who it is on the card.
MARIA- Hey, maybe you got a secret admirer!
MAYOR (blushing)- Whatever, kids. Get back in there!
MARIA- Bye, sheriff!
SHERIFF CHEWIE- See ya, kids!
Maria and Luke went back into the city hall. Sheriff Chewie started the truck and they drove out of the parking lot and started driving out of Town's Square.
MAYOR- Oh, yes! I know the wife is gonna get on my back for eating these chocolates but I can't help myself!
CHEWIE- I know the feeling, Mayor. Open that card, let's see who it's from!
The mayor opened a Valentine's card that was attached to the candy box.
MAYOR (reading)- I hope you have a Valentine's Day with bloody good cheer, but remember what happened as the fourteenth draws near-
The sheriff's eyes widened.
MAYOR (downright terrified)- No! It can't be!
The mayor tore open the candy box. All of a sudden, a putrid smell hit his nose. Inside the box was a thick, plump human's heart.
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15 years ago
Scene two
The chilly wind whipped across Eric's face. He was sitting on top of a hill, eating a huge sloppy burger that was dripping mayonnaise, lettuce and tomatoes onto the grass. Eric was 27 years old, a college dropout, and had one of the most arrogant attitudes anyone had ever come across. He was Liz's older brother, but the two of them liked to avoid each other at all costs. The way Eric saw it, he was the "evil sibling" and she was the "goody-two-shoes". He was one of the only people left in town who stayed after the mine incident. Eric remembered it all. Eric picked himself off of the ground. The wind rippled his long trench coat. His greasy bleached-blonde hair remained stiff. He walked down the hill, only for his eyes to meet the remains of the old Angel Mine that stood on the far right of the hill. The doors in front of it were chained and boarded over with dozens of wodden planks. A message was spray painted over the doors in red paint that said "Here Lies The Corpses Of The Dumbest Kids In The World-- Keep Out Forever". A freezing subzero chill creeped up Eric's spine. He quickly lit a cigarette.
ERIC (to himself)- I haven't forgotten about you guys.
He threw the cigarette down and quickly walked down the hill.
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Arash was at the back of the Miss Mable's Thrift Store, in the Used Cd aisle. He was flinging Cd's off of the racks and littering the floor with them.
ARASH- Gosh, can't fu**cking people give up good cd's once in a while?
Liz, Maria, and Luke were at the front of the thrift store, at the checkout counter. The store had huge, glossy windows at the entrance, where the kids could see directly into Town's Square. Liz was the only one who worked there, but the others just came to hang out. Miss Mable was out, so Liz had to have some help to watch over the store. The only problem was there wasn't any customers.
LIZ (calling out)- What are you doing back there, Arash?
ARASH (from the back of the store)- Trying to find CDs!!!!!
LIZ- You better be sure to clean that up!!!
MARIA- Jesus, he needs a stun gun or something.
LUKE- Maybe he's trying to find a CD for the DJ to play at the dance.
MARIA- He's not gonna find anything worth listening to backt here! This is a thrift store for godsakes!
LIZ (chuckling)- Hey, I resemble that remark!
LUKE- So, uh, I might have a date for the dance, you guys.
LIZ- Oh, really?
MARIA (sighing)- Oh, congratulations, Luke.
LUKE- What's with the sarcasm?
MARIA- Everytime you say you've gotten a new "boyfriend" or a new "date", it always ends up with you and some closet-gay jock in the back of his car somewhere and you'll come back the next day pissed off because he'll pretend he doesn't know you afterwards.
LUKE- What's wrong with that?
MARIA- I mean, I'm not knocking your hustle, because everyone knows that i-
LUKE (finishing)- Do it with everyone?
MARIA (smirking)- At least I know what I'm doing .
LIZ- Alright, end of conversation. You guys are both sluts, we get it.
MARIA- Get over yourself, honey.
LIZ- Come on, I need to stay being the good girl. If we were a group full of sluts, then we would be a complete mess. So, two sluts out of four ain't bad.
The three of them laughed. Then, all of a sudden, a blonde teenage girl slammed against the glass windows covered in fake blood and screaming her lungs out. A teenage guy dressed in a miner's jumpsuit and black gas mask ran behind her stabbing her with a plastic pickax.
GIRL- HELP ME!!!!!
GUY- BEWARE HARRY WARDEN!!!
The two prankers then started to laugh and ran down the street of Town's Square, where other prank kids were waiting.
LIZ- What the hell is with this town? Can't we just have a peaceful holiday for once?
Arash was coming up to the checkout counter, hands full of Cd's.
ARASH- A peaceful holiday? Come on, Liz. This an inbred mining town full of crazy people whose idea of "peace" is to beat the living sh!t out of each other at the bar on Friday nights.
MARIA (brimming)- Oh right! I almost forgot! Are you guys gonna go to Tommy Cheeseball's tonight? They're having a Valentine's special!
LUKE- Come on, that dive?
MARIA- Yeah, it'll be a fun thing to do before the dance tomorrow.
LIZ- Nobody's gonna be there but the quote on quote popular kids.
MARIA- We don't have to sit anywhere near them. Don't let floozies ruin you from having a good time.
ARASH- Alright, I'm down. I mean, how bad can it be?
LIZ- Guys! I don't like dealing with people like that! I bet Tamara and her Girlicious slut army are gonna be there and we get enough of them from City Hall. My brother used to act just like those idiots when he was in high school. He still does, actually.
ARASH- Oh, I almost forgot. How's Eric doing anyway?
LIZ- You know how he gets around this time of year. He's going to drink his liver right out. He spent the night at the house the other night. Of course my parents didn't know he was there, so I had to cover for his ass again. I heard him screaming in his sleep. He remembers everything.
MARIA- That's so sad.
LIZ- I know it is, and everytime I try to comfort him, he puts on his a$$hole front again. I don't have time for that. He'll come around if he wants to. If he doesn't, oh well. It's not like I'm gonna die.
MARIA- Well, kudos for standing up for yourself, Liz.
ARASH- You guys, it's better to forget what happened ten years ago. We were too young to even remember if we wanted to.
MARIA- You're right. All that matters is that we're finally having the dance.
They all smiled.
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Tamara's red Mercedes came speeding into the drive-through of the Mimi's Burgers fast food joint. The joint was really old-fashioned and was the oldest restaurant in Valentine's Bluffs. Tamara parked her car under a waiting pole. Every car was parked at a waiting pole and waitresses would come out on skates and take orders. The parking lot was huge and the place was quite crowded. Parker sat in the front passenger's seat and Mandy was in the back, painting her toenails with glossy glitter polish. Parker had a college preparation book in her lap.
TAMARA- Parker, why are you reading that book?
PARKER- It's for college, Tam. You know, the place that you go after you get out of high school?
TAMARA- I know that , but I hate seeing you read books. You should just concentrate on looks, like moi!
PARKER- Tamara, if I concentrated on looks all the time then I would have nothing useful about myself. I don't want to end up like my mom, wherever the hell she is.
Tamara saw that Parker was upset.
TAMARA- Hey, babe, I didn't mean it like that, you know?
She patted Parker's hand.
TAMARA- Listen, I'm a cold-hearted bitch. Everyone knows that, alright? And you and Mandy are the only girls that could ever put up with my attitude. I wouldn't be bitchy to you guys on purpose, okay?
PARKER- I know.
TAMARA- Good, now you girls better not tell anyone I said that or I'll rip out your implants!
Mandy and Parker bellowed with laughter.
TAMARA- So, are we going to the dive tonight as we planned?
MANDY- Yeah, it's cool. I was supposed to babysit Maddie tonight but I can get out of it.
PARKER- Are you sure, Mandy?
MANDY- Yeah, I'm sure.
She blew on her freshly-painted toes.
TAMARA- You know what, Mandy, I must say I'm proud of you keeping up with your commitment.
MANDY- What, about the sex thing?
TAMARA- Yeah!
MANDY- Well, I mean, it's not like I've COMPLETELY gone without sex in six months. One night, after the football game, me and Larry were behind the bleachers and he was all like "Let's do it" and I was like "No" and he was like "Please! I'll do anything" and I made him get down on his knees and beg. So, we compromised.
TAMARA- Compromised doing what?
MANDY- Let's just say he loves eating fish.
PARKER (laughing)- Wow.
TAMARA (rolling her eyes)- Scandalous.
MANDY- But other than that, I have not been penetrated.
PARKER- Good to know.
TAMARA- Hey, Mandy, didn't I give you the money earlier so we could pay for this because I thought I would spend it all?
MANDY- Oh, yeah, you did.
TAMARA- Where did you put it?
MANDY- They're in my panties, I think.
TAMARA & PARKER- What??
MANDY- Yeah, the money is safe in there.
PARKER- What money? Tamara's money or the tips you've been saving from the titty bar?
MANDY (cracking up)- Shut up, Parker!!
Mandy reached down in her skirt with her hand to look for the money.
PARKER- Mandy, your panties are hardly the Fort Knox of the undergarment world, I don't know why you put cash in there.
TAMARA- Mandy, do you even wear panties?
MANDY- Today!
The girls cracked up with laughter. Mandy finally pulled out a thick stack of hundreds. At that moment, the red-headed busty waitress skated over to Tamara's window, holding a pen and pad. She clearly had an attitude.
WAITRESS- Hi girls. What'll it be?
TAMARA- Mandy, Parker, what do you guys want?
MANDY- I want the burger, the chicken tenders, and the fries!
PARKER- I want a happy meal.
The girls laughed.
PARKER- Just kidding, I want the burger and the chicken tenders, too. And give me a malt with that!
MANDY- Me too!
WAITRESS (to Tamara)- And you?
TAMARA- A diet coke, please.
The waitress eyed Tamara.
WAITRESS- That's all ?
TAMARA (irked)- Yes, that's all! Now quit questioning me and skate your ass back inside to get our food!
The girls cracked up and the waitress skated off.
TAMARA- God, I hate waitresses.
MANDY- Tell me about it!
Tamara checked her watch.
TAMARA- Man, we got to get changed before we get to the dive tonight!
The waitress quickly skated back to Tamara's window with their food. Tamara thre a 50 dollar bill in her face and snatched the food away.
TAMARA- KEEP THE CHANGE, BITCH!!
The girls sped out of the parking lot, blaring hip hop and laughing their asses off. The waitress was pissed.
WAITRESS- Fu**ck you plastic sluts!! I hope Harry Warden guts your asses or something!!
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15 years ago
Scene three
Joseph was locking the entrance doors of City Hall. He put the keys in his pocket and threw on his backpack, walking down the steps. He was the only one who stayed the longest to decorate, making sure everything looked presentable for tomorrow night. He also was practicing some of his dance moves in the empty hall, just in case he would have someone to dance with for tomorrow. Joseph looked around. Town's Square was extremely quiet, no one was around and the sky was turning purple, with the sun just about to set. He walked down the street as a speeding sports car full of jocks drove past him.
JOCK #1- Hey, fat ass!!!
JOCK #2- Don't walk alone, you tubby bastard, or Harry Warden will get you!!!!!!!!
They all roared with laughter and drove away, disappearing down the street.
JOSEPH (to himself)- They're just pathetic. That's all it is, they're just pathetic.
All of a sudden, another car pulled beside Joseph. It was the sheriff's Jeep. Sheriff Chewie rolled down the windows.
SHERIFF CHEWIE- Joseph van der Berg! Is that you?
JOSEPH (stammering)- She- she- Sheriff Chewie! Hi!
SHERIFF CHEWIE- What are you doing walking around by yourself? It's getting dark.
JOSEPH- I uh- I always walk home by myself. What makes tonight any different?
Sheriff Chewie wasn't going to admit to the note that they had gotten earlier.
SHERIFF CHEWIE- It's just a safety precaution. Do you need a ride home or something?
JOSEPH- No, I'll be fine. Don't worry, I know how to run if I'm being chased. Bye, sheriff.
SHERIFF CHEWIE- Good night!
The sheriff then drove away. Joseph was confused. The sheriff always drove past him when he was walking home and did nothing but wave. But, now it was different. It's probably nothing , thought Joseph. He decided to forget about it and go home.
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Old Man Happy was spilling milkshakes all over the place behind the service counter. The dive bar was filled with loads of teenagers from all over Valentine's Bluffs. The lights were bright, waiters and waitresses were running to every table, laying down food and drinks. Kids were chattering, and everyone was excited for the next day of the Valentine's Dance. Old Man Happy had on his diner uniform and scoffed at the loud kids. This was the only job he could find- and he hated it. He lit a cigarette. A waiter appeared.
WAITER- Happy, why are you slacking? Just because you're 90 doesn't mean you're not gonna pull your weight around here!
HAPPY- Eat sh!t and die, you little punk!
The waiter rolled his eyes and left Happy alone. At the giant table in the middle of the bar was Parker, Mandy, Tamara, and other faceless bimbos, drinking Shirley Temples and dressed in their cutest and tightest outfits. At a more discreet table at the back of the bar, outside on the patio, sat Arash, Liz, Maria & Luke. The chilly wind breezed across their faces and caused their sodas in their cups to ripple. They sat far away from the superficial wannabes that chatted away inside, but they could still hear everything they were saying. The patio was right beside a long road that led into Town's Square.
LIZ- Guys, this feels so awkward. I mean I can deal with going to the dance but being here with all these kids is kind of overdoing it.
MARIA- Liz! It's good to get out once in awhile. Working in the thrift store 24/7 has got to be boring sometimes.
LIZ- Whatever, Maria.
ARASH- What's playing on the jukebox?
LUKE- Does it matter? It's not like you're gonna be able to get a song in with those a$$holes attacking the jukebox every second.
Inside, Mandy, Tamara and Parker were cracking up at another useless conversation, and Old Man Happy was spouting his gospel to a teenager waiting on a drink at the bar.
OLD MAN HAPPY- February 14th!! It's tomorrow.. and you dumb-ass kids are gonna be partying, ain't ya? Well, you better watch your back.. if you value your life..
Tamara was getting annoyed.
TAMARA- God, why does that old geezer even work here?? Does he ever shut up!!
MANDY- Hey, let him tell his story. I love fairy tales!
Happy spat out his cigarette and threw a cup against the wall. It shattered and the whole bar went quiet.
HAPPY- This ain't no DAMN fairy tale, little girl! It's true! I was there!
Arash, Liz, Maria and Luke walked back into the dive from the patio to see what the commotion was about. Everyone was all ears.
HAPPY- It was ten years ago...
FLASHBACK
We see the City Hall ten years ago, at night. It looks nothing like it does now, being significantly smaller. Loud music plays from inside and echoes through the dark streets.
OLD MAN HAPPY (narrating)- It was the night of the third Valentine Bluff's holiday dance.. The whole town was at City Hall,in good spirits.. But a group of dumb kids just like yourself, decided they were gonna throw a party of their own..
The entrance doors to the City Hall are kicked open, and out walks six teenagers, dressed casually, laughing and full of life. They are the brunette good girl Tracie Daniels, her loyal brunette best friend Brooke Posey, and their partying, eccentric friend Mimi Spears. Three guys, Artie Carter, the footballer, Charlie Mann, the Star Wars freak, and a young Eric Poole, Tracie's boyfriend. All six of them began running down the empty street, excited.
MIMI- Let's go, guys!! There's a kick ass party at the mine!!
TRACIE- Calm down, girl! We'll get there!
BROOKE- Slow down, guys! Before I break a heel!
We see the six of them, along with a drove of teenagers, running down a hill to the Angel Mine, where a bunch of cars were parked, and rock music was playing. Kids from the town were partying and running in the mine. Artie, Brooke, Charlie & Mimi ran ahead but Tracie and Eric walked further behind. They looked at each other and passionately kissed.
ERIC- I love you.
TRACIE- I love you more.
ERIC- You sure you wanted to come to the mine? We could've stayed at City Hall if you wanted to-
TRACIE- It's fine, Eric. Let's have fun. Don't worry about me.
ERIC- Alright.
Brooke and Mimi began calling for them.
BROOKE- Eric! Tracie! Get over here! We want to take a picture of you guys!
TRACIE- Oh, god, I hate pictures!
MIMI- Come on, don't be a buzzkill!
TRACIE- Shut up Mimi!
Eric and Tracie walked up to them and posed for a picture beside a truck. Mimi positioned her Polaroid throwaway camera.
MIMI- Say "over- the-pants- hand job!"
TRACIE- Eww!!
Then, Charlie and Artie jumped in the picture as the camera snapped.
ERIC- I knew you guys were gonna do something like that.
ARTIE- Relax, Eric, bro. It's all in good fun!
CHARLIE- Alright, can we quit with this sappy mushy sh!t and go inside the mine?
MIMI- Woo hoo! Let's go!
The six of them walked in the brightly-lit tunnel of the Angel Mine. The ground was rocky and the air was coarse. The walls of the tunnel were made out of battered tin. Other teenagers were walking in and out of the mine as well. The tunnel stretched for miles and turned into two different directions.
HAPPY (narrating)- Dumb kids! In that same mine a year before, a methane gas expolosion killed a bunch of miners because the supervisors didn't check the gas levels. Only one miner survived- Harry Warden. A real sadistic bastard. I mean a real prick. After he was released from the hospital, he killed the supervisors from that fateful night. But he wasn't through yet..
We see Mimi and Artie sloppily making out in a corner by themselves, split up from everyone.
MIMI (moaning)- Oh yeah!! Yes!!
ARTIE- Do you like that?
A shadow approached them. Mimi's eyes widened.
MIMI- OH MY GOD!!!
ARTIE- What? What is it?
Suddenly, a sharp and rusty pickax sliced through Artie's skull. Blood and bone matter exploded in Mimi's face. Harry Wraden snatched the pickax out of his head, and Artie's corpse fell to the ground. Harry was dressed in a black miner's uniform and his face was hidden by a huge Darth Vader-esque miner gas mask. Mimi went to run but Harry tossed the pickax in the air and it landed in the back of her neck. The pickax was lodged in her throat. Harry savagely tore it away, beheading her. Her head rolled down the railcart track. A couple of kids saw her head rolling and saw Harry standing there. They screamed and immediately ran away.
KID- EVERYBODY RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KID 2- IT'S HARRY WARDEN!!!
Dozens of kids were running out of the mine in groups, knocking each over to get out. Tracie and Eric were getting closer to the entrance of the mine but Tracie stopped Eric.
ERIC (paniced)- Tracie, what is it?? We gotta get out of here!
TRACIE- We can't leave Brooke and Charlie!! We gotta get them!! Please, Eric!
ERIC- Alright, fine!
They turned back around and ran deep into the mine, which was now completely empty. All of the kids had completely disappeared.
TRACIE (whispering loudly)- Brooke! Charlie!! Where are you??
ERIC- Brooke! Charlie!
All of a sudden, Eric and Tracie were grabbed by someone and pulled into a dark corner. It was Brooke and Charlie. They motioned to Eric and Tracie to be completely quiet. In the corner, they saw the fuming Harry Warden storming through the tunnel, looking for someone to kill. He threw things around, looking for someone he thought might be hiding. Brooke let a gasp escape her mouth and Harry quickly turned around and saw them all hiding in the corner. The four of them quickly ran away but Brooke slipped and fell to the ground.
TRACIE- Brooke!!
Eric held on to Tracie and wouldn't let her help Brooke. Charlie went to help her off the ground. Harry grabbed a broken beer bottle off the ground and buried the sharp end into Charlie's eye.
BROOKE- NOO!!
TRACIE- ERIC, LET ME GO!!
Charlie collapsed to the ground and Brooke started punching and fighting Harry. Harry stumbled as she kicked him.
TRACIE- Brooke, let's go!!!!!
Brooke went to run but Harry shoved the pickax into her spine. Eric couldn't believe what he was seeing. Tears streamed out of Tracie's eyes.
TRACIE (crying)- Brooke-
Harry pushed Brooke to the ground and now had his full attention on Eric and Tracie. They ran towards the entrance but Harry was hot on their trail. He grabbed Tracie by the hair. Eric began hardly punching Harry with his fists.
ERIC- Let her go!!!!
TRACIE- Eric, run!! Eric, run!!!
Harry cracked Traci's neck right in front of Eric. Eric was overwhelmed with rage.
ERIC- NOO!! YOU'RE GONNA DIE, YOU BASTARD!!
Eric punched and kicked Harry but he wasn't strong enough to send him to the ground. At that moment, sirens approached the front of the mine. Cops raided the mine. One of the cops, a then younger and less-drunk Happy screamed at Eric to get down.
HAPPY- Get down, kid!!!
Harry threw the weak Eric to the ground and Happy and the cops began firing bullets into him. Harry staggered with every bullet piercing his chest. He just staggered as a bullet hit the bulblights of the tunnel. The lights flickered and flickered. Cops raided inside and grabbed Eric. Tracie laid lifeless on the ground.
ERIC- NOO!! I can't leave without her!!!
HAPPY- Get that kid home to his parents!!
The cops carried Eric out of the tunnel and as the lights stopped flickering, they noticed Harry was gone.
HAPPY (narrating)- After that night, nobody ever saw Harry again.. He disappeared right in front of our eyes.. And now, you kids got the balls to have a dance.. You better watch out because nobody knows for sure if Harry really is dead.. They say he waits in the darkness around the mine, for a foolish kid he can kill..
END OF FLASHBACK
The kids in the dive were all quiet and wide-eyed of the story Happy was telling. He pointed at all of the kids.
HAPPY- IT COULD BE ONE OF YOU!!! Forget about having a fu**cking party all night tomorrow night.. or you'll be sorry .
All of a sudden, someone threw a burger at Happy's face. Everyone roared with laughter and in true fashion, forgot all about the story. Liz got her jacket and she, Maria, Luke and Arash all left the dive. Happy scraped the messy sandwich off of his face.
HAPPY- Fu**cking ass holes.
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15 years ago
Scene four
The moonlight illuminated Reaper's Curve, the dark highway and cliff just outside Valentine's Bluffs. Kwame Bingham cursed inside his red sports car, which clouds of smoke were coming from. The car needed oil- or something, and Kwame needed to get to a gas station quick.
KWAME- Come on, you dumb ass car! Please, please make it!
Kwame,a handsome, young 18-year-old light-brown skinned guy, was hired as the DJ to the Valentine's dance in the Bluffs. His record equipment slid back and forth in his backseat. He was driving on a high cliff, and when he looked down he could see the lights of Valentine's Bluffs lightyears down.
KWAME- Damn it, how in the hell am I supposed to get down there?
It was really quiet around, and the highway was completely empty. He decided to turn on the radio. Through the speakers came a slutty and trashy voice that immediately annoyed Kwame.
RADIO PERSONALITY- What's up to all my sugar daddies and strippin mamas out there?? This is the "Hot Probs" Midnight Show on 67.1 KISS FM with-
Another voice cut in.
RADIO PERSONALITY 2- Melanie Lowry!! How's everybody doing out there?
RADIO PERSONALITY- And the real star is me! Guess who it is?? It ain't Britney, it's LULU, BITCH!!!!
Lulu bellowed in laughter.
MELANIE- And tonight's topic is getting drunk and then having sex. My suggestion is, don't do it, people!!
LULU- Melanie, you're such a buzz kill, people get drunk to have sex, smart ass! DO IT, people!! Especially if you're gettin' paid! You use what you got to get what you want, that's my lifestyle!
MELANIE- Lulu, what does that have to do with anything-
LULU- Hey, I'm just stating my opinion, honey.
MELANIE- And it's not a good one!
Kwame turned off the radio.
KWAME- Wow, who gave those strippers a radio show?
He finally saw a gas station at the side of the road. It was a gas station and a tire shop in one and was dilapidated and looked quite old. Kwame was desperate and needed oil or he would be stranded at the side of the road. He pulled up in the rundown parking lot where the gas pumps were. He noticed all of the gas pumps were broken but were taped together by duct tape. The gas station's building itself was dark inside and the doors were chained up but ont he side was a huge garage where tons of tires were stacked up. Kwame got out of the car and went to walk towards it. He got to the front of the garage and saw that someone was in the back throwing around car tools.
KWAME- Hello?
The unseen person kept throwing tools.
KWAME- Excuse me?! I need an oil job, please!! And if you wouldn't mind, could you make it quick?
The person finally stopped and appeared from behind a stack of tires. It was a dirty middle-aged man with thick glasses, a blue jumpsuit and a mouth full of brown teeth.
UNCLE CREEPY (deep, scratchy voice)- Can I help you with somethin', kid?
KWAME (startled)- Um, erm, yeah, I need an oil change- My car, there's smoke coming from the engine.
UNCLE CREEPY- That'll be fifty bucks!
KWAME- Fifty bucks? Are you kidding me?
UNCLE CREEPY- Look, kid, either cough up fifty bucks or find another gas station, damn it!
KWAME- Look, mister, is there any way you can cut me a break here? I'm in a crunch and I need to DJ a dance tomorrow night and I need to get to Valentine's Bluffs!
Uncle Creepy choked on the piece of tobacco he was chewing.
UNCLE CREEPY- Va-Va- Valentine's Bluffs?
KWAME- Yes! What's the problem?
UNCLE CREEPY- A dance? Why are they having a dance?
KWAME- What the fu*ck does it matter? Are you gonna fix my car or not?
UNCLE CREEPY- Fine, take me to it.
Kwame and Uncle Creepy walked outside to the sports car.
UNCLE CREEPY- Well, you left your motor running.
KWAME- Fine, I'll turn it off.
UNCLE CREEPY- Nah, leave it to me, I might as well do it.
Uncle Creepy opened the passenger's door of Kwame's sportscar. He took the keys out of the slot and the engine stopped. All of a sudden, a bright light beamed on Uncle Creepy's face. He looked up and saw a huge, black Darth Vader-esque miner's mask.
UNCLE CREEPY- OH MY GOD--
A rusty pickax came swinging into Uncle Creepy's forehead. Blood sputtered everywhere. Kwame's eyes widened. The miner tore the pickax out and Uncle Creepy's corpse slammed to the ground. The miner stepped out of Kwame's car breathing hardly through the gas mask and staring right at Kwame.
KWAME- OH SH!T!
Kwame went to run into the tire garage but the miner was hot on his trail. He swang out the pickax and caught the back of Kwame's pants. Kwame dropped to the ground, tearing away his pants and his T-shirt. He was left in nothing except his boxers. The miner approached and Kwame swang his fist into his mask. He stumbled backward. Kwame quickly got off of the ground and raced into the tire garage, nearly naked. The chilly air breezed against his body. Stacks of tires and tires were everywhere. The miner was getting closer to the garage. Kwame saw a door in the garage that led into the gas station's building next door. Kwame opened it and shut the door back. He was inside the gas station. There were racks and racks of food and snacks and beverage freezers in the back. Kwame jumped over the checkout counter and dropped to the ground, putting his hand over his mouth. He heard the garage door open. The miner walked into the gas station. He smashed around the racks, trying to find Kwame. Kwame held his breath tight. The miner finally went up to the checkout counter and his light beamed down on Kwame. Kwame threw a bottle in his face.
KWAME- Fu**ck you!!!!
He quickly got off the floor and grabbed a food rack and shook all of the products off of it. The miner came swinging the pickax and Kwame slammed his back against the freezers with the food rack in front of him.
KWAME- Leave me the fu**ck alone!!! Get away from me!!
The miner swang the pickax but Kwame maneuvered the rack so it didn't hit him. The cold freezer was stiffening Kwame, who was in nothing except boxers. The miner swang the pickax again. It missed again. Kwame slammed the rack against the miner.
KWAME- Fu**ck you!!
All of a sudden, the miner swung the pickax and it sliced into Kwame's chest. Kwame slid to the ground, lifeless.
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Liz was in the basement of her house. The lights were dim and she had soft music playing. She loved to go down there to clear her thoughts and no one ever bothered her. She was in her pajamas with a cup of hot cocoa and dozens of old photo albums to keep her company. She was smiling at the pictures of her as a kid and Eric as a teenager at soccer games and at the park. She turned the pages. Her heart stopped when she saw the pictures of Eric and his old girlfriend Tracie her mom had took of them before they left the house for the fateful dance.
LIZ- Eric...
All of a sudden, her mother's voice called from upstairs.
LIZ'S MOM (offscreen)- Liz, are you in bed?
LIZ- Yeah, mom, Good night!
Liz closed up the photo albums, submerged herself in her blankets, and turned off all the lights.
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The mayor was in Sheriff Chewie's office, going through file folders of the 1998 massacre. The sheriff's office was on the top fourth floor of the police station. The entire building was dark and empty and the Sheriff's office was the only thing that was lit up. The mayor nervously chugged on a cigar and was pacing back and forth while the sheriff was at his desk, going through the papers.
MAYOR- Sheriff, I know something is gonna happen tomorrow. I just know it.
SHERIFF- And what if we're wrong about this? What if that heart was just an animal's heart or something and this whole thign was a prank?
MAYOR- You don't remember how those torn-out hearts looked ten years ago?
The sheriff swallowed his words.
MAYOR- So what does those files say? No record of Harry's death?
SHERIFF- No.
MAYOR- Then it's him. He's coming back!
SHERIFF- Mayor, do you know how old Harry would be by now? We won't have anything to worry about if we just keep our eyes and ears open tomorrow. We should just make sure the kids have restrictions at the city hall, then there won't be any funny business.
MAYOR (sighing)- This is all too much for my old brain to take in. I've been hearing that that old cretin Happy has been running his disgusting mouth down at the dive, getting the kids all riled up. That's just what we need! Panic!
SHERIFF- Who's gonna believe a retarded old asswipe like him, anyway? Don't worry.
MAYOR- Don't say "retarded", Sheriff. It's rude, say "retired".
SHERIFF- But Happy's not retired.
MAYOR (annoyed)- You get my point??
SHERIFF- Yeah, yeah.
At that moment, the Mayor and Sheriif heard a commotion coming from the hallway. A lot of bumping and crashing noises.
MAYOR- What the hell is going on out there?
The Mayor and the Sheriff ran to the office door and opened it. They saw the bathroom door was wide open. The sheriff quickly ran to it, drawing out his gun.
SHERIFF- Freeze!!
Chewie noticed it was just a young cop, Officer Greene, throwing up in the toilet.
SHERIFF- Yeesh, Greene, what's the problem?
GREENE (in between ralphing)- Out- Outside... Look outside.. It's fu**cking disgusting!!
He dropped his head in the toilet bowl.
MAYOR- What's going on?
SHERIFF- We have to get outside!
The Mayor and the Sheriff raced down the flights of stairs. When they finally got to the bottom floor, a smoldering putrid smell overcame their noses.
MAYOR (repulsed)- My God, what is that??
SHERIFF- I don't know!
They opened the entrance doors of the police station. When they saw what was outside, the mayor's dinner began rising to his stomach. He quickly ran back inside. The sheriff gulped. On the porch stairs was the head of the dirty gas station attendant, Creepy, with his heart, lungs and intestines strewn out on the stairs. A note, written in red and pink letters, was on top of his remains. It read. "Cancel the dance-- or every child in this town will burn."
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15 years ago
Scene five
The white moonlight was oeering in Tamara's glossy bedroom windows. Her room had mahogany carpet, a shiny wooden ceiling, and purple walls. Dozens of pillows and hefty blankets were strewn across her gigantic bed, where she, Mandy and Parker were scantily clad and all sleeping. The radio was softly playing, with the voices of the "Hot Probs" hosts Melanie and Lulu speaking.
LULU (voice on radio)- Alright, my lovely listeners, it's getting down to the wire so me and Melanie are gonna turn in for the night!
MELANIE (voice on radio)- But everybody come out and see us in Valentine's Bluffs for their first dance in ten years! We'll be live there, so everybody better listen!
LULU- That's right, Melanie. We'll be live! Which means anything could happen!
MELANIE- Like what? You'll get drunk and flash everybody there?
LULU- Hey! You never know! See you, tomorrow guys!
Parker began to toss and turn. She stretched and rose out of Tamara's bed. She looked down at Mandy and Tamara, both in a deep sleep.
PARKER (to herself)- Wow, just think, you guys will be throwing up and sleeping in the street tomorrow.
Parker moved to the radio and shut it off. Her tight t-shirt and boyshorts were not enough to keep the night air from chilling her thighs. She went to close one of Tamara's many windows. At the bedroom window in the middle, Parker noticed rocks bouncing on it from outside.
Tap. Tap. Tap.
PARKER- Who the hell?
She walked to the window and peered outside. She couldn't believe her eyes. Outside, in the stale darkness, sitting on a sidewalk bench, was a miner, in a black gas mask and black overalls, clutching a sharp pickax. The miner was singing in a deep, disturbing tone.
MINER (off key)- Will you girls.. be my bloody valentine...
Parker was petrified. She quickly shut the window and drew the curtains. She raced to the bed to wake up the girls.
PARKER (panicked whispering)- Tam!!! Mandy!! Get up!!
The girls wouldn't budge. Parker noticed her hands were caked in blood. She turned over Tamara and saw that her throat had been savagely ripped open.
PARKER (shocked)- OH MY-
She saw that Mandy's chest was cut open, and her heart was missing. Parker turned around and at that moment, the wall exploded and the miner came flying in with his pickax raised.
PARKER- AAAHHHHH!!!!
All of a sudden, she found herself arising in Tamara's bed in a cold sweat. It was just a dream. Mandy stretched and awoke, along with Tamara.
TAMARA- Parker, what's wrong? Did you have a bad dream or something?
PARKER- Yeah, it freaked me the hell out.
MANDY- Don't worry. You're just having jitters before the dance. Let's go downstairs to get something to pig out on.
The girls walked out of Tamara's bedroom and into the hallway that led downstairs. The girls heard loud moaning sounds.
MANDY- Eww!! Who is that??
The girls walked further down the hall by Tamara's mom's room. Her door was wide open and she was ass-naked on her bed, having animalistic sex with Tamara's dad.
TAM'S MOM- OH YES!!!! YOU STILL GOT IT, BABY!!
TAM'S DAD- WHO'S YOUR DADDY!!
Tamara, disgusted, quickly shut her door.
TAMARA (pissed)- I can't believe that prehistoric skank!
Mandy and Parker were already laughing and their stomachs were hurting. They all ran down the stairs, chuckling. In the kitchen, Tamara took some instant hot-cocoa packets out of a drawer and took out some bags of chips.
TAMARA- See what I mean, guys? I have two old-as-dirt horndogs for parents. My mom deserves to make movies that dweebs jerk off too. That whore!
Mandy and Parker were on the ground, stomping and laughing their asses off.
TAMARA- It's not funny, you two bitches!
The girls finally calmed down and got off of the ground. Their faces were red.
PARKER- We're sorry, Tam. But you gotta give it to your parents!
MANDY- Yeah, they're still trying to get their groove back!
TAMARA (finally giving in to joke)- You guys are something else.
She was mixing milk into the mugs with hot cocoa.
MANDY- Hey, guys, what music do you think they'll play at the dance?
TAMARA- Oh, God, who knows? You know Arash is the music freak and he loves that "I Can Ride My Bike With No Handlebars" bullsh!t music.
MANDY- I know, right? And what about Luke?
TAMARA- That flamer. He'll probably request 'Sexy Back" or something. Gay guys love that sh!t.
PARKER- Tam, be nice.
TAMARA- I am being nice, Park. At least I'm not saying this to their faces.
MANDY- Well, besides the Geek Squad, I think we're gonna have a really good night. Are we gonna dress up or go casual?
PARKER- I was thinking casual. I hate dresses.
TAMARA- But you just picked out the sexiest one the other day! You have to wear it! The boys will love it-
PARKER- There you go, sounding like my Grandma- again.
TAMARA- Parker, calm down. We know you're all like "I DO NOT HOOK UP" unlike Mandy and me, but this is the first Valentine's dance for our generation! Make sure you do everything you can to remember it!
MANDY- Wow, Tamara, that was the whoriest quote I've ever heard you say.
TAMARA (big headed)- Thank you!
All of a sudden, Tamara's mom began moaning again.
TAM'S MOM (from upstairs)- YES!!! DADDY!! DADDY!!! I'VE BEEN NAUGHTY!!
TAM'S DAD- YOU'VE BEEN A BAD LITTLE GIRL!!
Their bed was crashing and dust fell from the ceiling.
MANDY- Can you say "Viagra"?
TAMARA (repulsed)- Let's eat outside.
PARKER- Good idea.
They grabbed their food and went to walk outside.
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Maria couldn't sleep. She was in her bedroom with all of the lights brightly turned on. She wore nothing but a rugged leather jacket and a pair of panties, while she read out of a magazine. Maria thought she was too cool to admit it but she was abnormally excited for the dance. There rarely were any chances to party in Valentine's Bluffs, you had to go somewhere else if you wanted to, but not now. She was a party animal and could care less what anyone thought about it. All of a sudden, there was a knock at her window. Maria quickly took off the jacket and slipped on a wife beater. At her window was Arash and Luke.
MARIA (groaning)- What the hell are you guys doing here?
She opened her window while they climbed in and stumbled to the ground, laughing.
MARIA- Will you both keep it down? People in this house are sleeping!
LUKE- Sorry!
Arash closed the window and he and Luke sat on the floor. They had a bag of burgers and fries.
ARASH- We got you some food!
MARIA- Cool!
She dug her hand in the bag and began to treat herself.
ARASH- We didn't know you were gonna be awake.
MARIA- And I didn't know you two would be sneaking in at like 2:00 in the morning! Is Liz coming?
ARASH- Nah, she couldn't get out of the house.
MARIA- Well, why are you two roaming the streets?
The guys went silent. Maria noticed something on Luke's face. A black eye.
MARIA- Jesus, Luke, what happened to you?
LUKE- Just forget about it.
MARIA- No, tell me what happened!
LUKE (stammering)- My dad, he, uh, found a letter a guy wrote to me from school.
ARASH- So he hit him and kicked him out. What a prick!
MARIA- Don't worry, it'll be fine. You can lay low in my room or at Arash's house until your dad clams down.
LUKE-And then what? It's the same thing everytime he gets drunk. He'll knock me out and then apologize and pretend that it never happened.
ARASH- Screw that clown, Luke. You still got us.
LUKE (brightening up)- Yeah, you're right. Thanks, guys.
MARIA- Besides, we need you in a good mood for the dance. You can make out with as many dudes as you want there and not get punched.
Luke stuck up his middle finger.
ARASH- This dance better be as good as it's been hyped up to be, because I didn't spend hours at that stupid thrift store looking for the perfect shirt for nothing!
MARIA- Don't worry, Arash, I'm sure the ladies will love your thrift store shirt.
ARASH- What's wrong with the thrift store?
MARIA (sighing)- Nothing, Arash, nothing.
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15 years ago
Scene six
Sheriff Chewie and the Mayor were pulling up to Uncle Creepy's gas station on the Reaper's Curve highway. The sun had rose and the harsh sunlight pierced the Mayor's old eyes. Ambulance trucks and cop cars were parked at the gas station.
SHERIFF CHEWIE- This is just what we need. Cops from out of town dipping in our business.
MAYOR- Well, we can't hide this from them, sheriff.
SHERIFF CHEWIE- Yeah, sure, mayor.
Their jeep pulled up in the parking lot and Chewie and the Mayor stepped out to talk to the two officers approaching them.
CHEWIE- Good morning, officers.
OFFICER 1- Morning!
OFFICER 2- We thought you'd wanna see this. That gutted body that was in front of your station.. It was-
CHEWIE- Uncle Creepy. Yeah, he's been at this gas station for years. That guy was so strange, he gave Happy a run for his money.
OFFICER 1- There was another victim.
A paramedic wheeled out a gurney. The officers pulled off the sheet, revealing Kwame's mutilated body, with his eyes wide open, staring into nowhere.
CHEWIE- Oh my God!!!! The DJ!!!
MAYOR- This can't be happening!!
OFFICER 1- It, um, looks like a no brainer.
MAYOR- What? What are you talking- What's a no brainer??
One of the officers turned Kwame's bloody head around. His entire back skull had been ripped to nothing and his brain was missing.
OFFICER 2- There's no brain. Scooped clean out of his skull.
The paramedic wheeled the gurney away.
OFFICER 1- Listen, these two murders are related to your town. What's going on over there in Valentine's Bluffs??
MAYOR- We think that Harry-
CHEWIE- It doesn't matter! We're canceling the dance! Let's tear every banner, poster, decoration & sign down because if we let it go on, this sick bastard will keep on killing and- and- GET THAT DAMN CITY HALL LOCKED UP!!
The sheriff walked back to his Jeep.
OFFICER 1- If you need any help, Mayor, just contact us.
MAYOR- Thanks, officer.
SHERIFF (calling)- Mayor, let's go!!
The Mayor walked back to the jeep and they quickly backed up and sped down the road.
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Liz was at the checkout counter of Miss Mable's thrift store, counting the money in the cash register. Miss Mable wouldn't be coming in until later, and Liz was in charge. A couple of people were scattered across the store, looking for bargain deals. Liz looked at a bag that was underneath the cash register. She smiled. Inside the bag was the dress she was going to wear to the dance. At that moment, someone walked in the thrift store's entrance. Liz looked up and she was quickly surprised as her brother, Eric, walked to the register.
LIZ- Wow, um, hello Eric.
ERIC 9slightly nervous)- Hey, I bought you some breakfast.
A brown paper bag that had bagels and eggs in it was set on the counter. Eric had to want something. He was never nice because he felt like it.
LIZ- Thanks, but what are you doing here? I haven't seen you in weeks.
ERIC- I know, I know. I came to let you know that I don't want you to go to the dance.
LIZ (irked)- What?
ERIC- I just don't think it's safe and I don't want you to go.
LIZ- Eric, I'm not gonna sit at home and not have fun with my friends just because you said!
ERIC- You don't remember what happened ten years ago, Liz?!
LIZ- Eric, please don't go there-
ERIC- I lost all of my friends! All of them! And why? Because we were at the wrong place at the wrong time! How do I know that you and your friends won't do soemthing stupid, either?
LIZ- Eric, why do you think that you can drop out of my life but still tell me what to do? We don't have that kind of relationship!
ERIC (pleading)- Liz, just please listen to me-
LIZ- No! I'm going to the dance!
ERIC- Why?
LIZ- I can't take this anymore! Harry Warden is dead, Eric. Do you hear me? Dead !! There's nothing left to worry about! So maybe you should move on! That's what everyone else is doing so you just salvage a piece of the life you still have left and try to have a happy existence!
Eric was lost for words.
LIZ- Now, can you please leave? I have to get back to work.
ERIC- I'll be at that dance, Liz. I'm not through with this yet.
Liz scoffed and Eric stormed away. At that moment, the misfit Joseph came walking in the thrift store and accidentally bumped into Eric.
JOSEPH- Oh, sorry, there.
ERIC (blowing up)- Watch where you're fu**cking going, you damn dweeb!
With that insult, Eric left the store. Liz waved for Joseph and he joined her at the counter.
LIZ- Sorry about him, Joseph. He's just on edge. It's that time of the year.
JOSEPH- Yeah, I can understand. So, where's your friends?
LIZ- Who knows? All I know is that I have to work so I'm taking care of all of my business before the dance.
JOSEPH- Yeah, you were always the responsible one.
LIZ- So, what brings you here?
JOSEPH- Just wanted to hang before tonight.
LIZ- Ready to show off your dance moves?
JOSEPH (jokingly)- If everybody can handle it.
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A mirror is broken, and the glass shards scatter on the floor. Through the reflection of the shards, we see that we're in a dark room. The lights are dim. Someone is angrily breathing loudly. A gloved hand pulls out a black yearbook. The cover reads "VALENTINE'S BLUFFS HIGH". The person breathes hardly and opens the yearbook. He grabs a red marker and begins writing words on different pictures. The pictures are the yearbook photos of Tamara, Mandy, Parker, Liz, Arash, Luke, Maria and Joseph. The words say "DIE".
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Liz and Joseph were still at the thrift store, talking at the counter.
JOSEPH- Wow, I haven't been this excited in a really long time.
LIZ- We all haven't! I was a little against it at first, but I think tonight is gonna be awesome-
Liz stopped what she was saying. As she looked out of the front gargantuan windows of the thrift store, she saw someone dressed as a miner in the middle of the street. The miner raised a pickax. Liz looked closely. The pickax was made of rubber. The miner tore off his mask, laughing. It was just a jock messing around.
LIZ- God, I hate it when the kids do that. Don't they have any respect?
JOSEPH- Hey, at least they don't mess with you when you're walking home.
LIZ- They're all asswipes, all of them.
Then, Joseph and Liz noticed that droves of kids were racing down the street in Town's Square. They all looked pretty frazzled and were storming towards City Hall.
LIZ- Hey, what's going on?
JOSEPH- Something's up at City Hall.
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15 years ago
Scene seven
Sheriff Chewie was putting an enormous padlock on the front doors of City Hall. Just as he was about to turn the key, he head the complaining and shouting coming from the droves of teens gathering in the sunny street of Town's Square.
CHEWIE (to himself)- Sh*t! I knew this wasn't going to be easy..
Almost every kid in town were amongst the teens in front of the building. Three random kids pushed their way through the crowd until they got to the front. They rushed up the stone stairs to the building and approached the Sheriff.
KID 1- Hey, sheriff, what's this about? What gives?
The sheriff turned to the crowd of screaming kids.
SHERIFF (loudly)- Alright, kids. Settle down. I'm sure you're wondering what's going on and it hurts me to tell you this, but the Valentine's Dance tonight is being canceled.
At that moment, a roar of curses erupted.
SHERIFF (annoyed)- Look, kids, I didn't want to be the one to tell you, but I'm, afraid the Mayor and I didn't have a choice-
KID 2- Why?! Why is it being canceled? The committee didn't spend all that time decorating this damn building for a dance that wasn't even going to happen!
SHERIFF- I understand that you kids would naturally be upset and I would tell you the reason but-
KID 3- Why not? We deserve to at least know!
SHERIFF- I'm not authorized to tell any of you anything. All you need to know is that some weird, twisted sh!t is going down and we're not taking any chances- not this time. And you owe us the respect to not throw any other parties, either. The dance here is canceled and there won't be any other parties at all! Got it!!??
The Sheriff couldn't stomach looking at the sea of disappointed faces in the crowd of teens. This is for your own good, kids.. he thought.
KID 1- This is bullsh-
KID 2- Just let it go, man. Let's go.
SHERIFF- No "ifs", "ands" or "buts" about it. No dance at City Hall, no other parties being thrown either!
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Maria was straightening her hair in the mirror of her bedroom. Her windows were up, letting the warm breeze pour in her room. The sunlight beamed through. "Hit Me With Your Best Shot" by Pat Benatar was softly playing on her radio. Maria couldn't help but sing along.
MARIA (singing)- Hit me with your best shot.. Come on, hit me with your best shot.. Hit me with your best shot, fire awaaaaaayyyyy...
She opened her vanity drawer and pulled out her small nosering. She carefully began to bury it in her nostril, until-
RING!!!!! RING!!!!! RING!!!!
MARIA- Oh sh*t!!
Maria had accidentally cut her nose. Driplets of blood fell on her counter. She quickly grabbed a napkin and pressed it on her nose. The phone continued to ring. She snatched it off of the receiver.
MARIA - Hello?
Heavy breathing.
MARIA- Hello? Who is this?
Quiet chuckling.
MARIA (instantly irked)- If you're not gonna say anything you fu**cking weirdo-
DISTORTED VOICE- Maria...........
The sound of the voice instantly catapulted freezing shivers up Maria' spine. It sounded full of quiet rage.
DISTORTED VOICE- Will you be my bloody valentine....
MARIA (stammering)- Who-- Who is-is-this?
The person hung up. Maria threw the phone down. She quickly had an instinct to look out her window. Maria walked to the other end of her room and stuck her head out of the window. Her voice sank in her throat when she saw a miner standing by her tree swing, raising his gloved hand at her. He held a plump, bloody heart in his hand.
MARIA- OH MY GOD-
She quickly shut every existing window in her room. All of a sudden, she head a door open downstairs. The door closed again, and heavy footsteps echoed through her empty house. Maria couldn't bear it. She snatched open one of her drawers and pulled out a thick steak knife. Fu**ck this, she thought. Maria quietly walked out of her room and into the upstairs hallway. The footsteps had stopped, but she could hear things being thrown around- like someone was rambling. Maria raised the knife and held it tighter. She rushed down the staircase. The noises started getting louder. She walked further and further down the hall and jumped around the corner, eyes closed, screaming.
MARIA- GET OUT OR I'LL KILL YOU, YOU PSYCHO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
When she opened her eyes, she saw Luke standing there, in the hallway closet, going through clothes.
LUKE (shocked)- Jeez, Maria, what the hell is your problem??
MARIA (relieved)- Luke, Luke, Luke, do you know you almost gave me a fu**cking heart attack??!!! What the hell are you doing?!?!
LUKE- Maria, calm down, alright! I was just trying to borrow a jacket for tonight, but I'm not ready to get stabbed for it!
MARIA- No, I thought you were this creep that was in my backyard- Oh my god, what if he's still there??
Maria hurried into the kitchen, where the backdoor was. She pushed the door open and saw that her backyard was empty. There wasn't a soul around. Luke caught up with her.
LUKE- Who did you see out there??
MARIA- It was a- a miner! And he had a heart in his hand! I know I saw him! I wasn't dreaming!
LUKE- Well, I didn't see anybody when I came in.
MARIA- Damn it, I know what I saw.
LUKE- Maria, do you know how many kids have those outfits in town? They were probably just playing a joke on you. Simmer down, I've never seen you this shaken up.
Maria closed the back door.
MARIA (putting on a front)- I'm not shaken up, I was just uh- surprised.
They walked back into the livingroom.
LUKE- Well, did you hear?
MARIA- Hear about what?
LUKE- The dance got canceled!
MARIA (surprised)- Are you serious? Why?
LUKE- It was the sheriff's order. Nobody knows why he did it, but he doesn't want anybody partying.
MARIA- What are we gonna do now?
LUKE- Do you honestly think Chewie is gonna stop the partying tonight? I got a tip! Some kids are going to throw another party! At the mine!
MARIA- The mine? Isn' t that place condemned or something?
LUKE- Not tonight. And if enough people keep their mouthes shut, we'll be able to get away with it. There's a rec room there, enough space for a dance floor, a pool table, bathrooms, everything we need!
MARIA- Well, I guess that sounds cool.
LUKE- Yeah, it's gonna be great. But I do need to borrow one of your jackets.
MARIA- Why?
LUKE- I pulled some strings and my band is gonna perform tonight.
MARIA- The Seven Deadlies? Awesome!! I haven't seen you guys perform in forever! Which guy did you suck off to arrange this?
LUKE (jokingly)- Whichever guy I wanted.
MARIA (laughing)- Too much information there, Freddie Mercury.
LUKE- Whatever, but yeah, Arash and Liz already know about it.
MARIA- Where are they?
LUKE- Liz is still at work but Arash went to go get beer.
MARIA- He went to get beer? He's underage!!
LUKE- He has his ways...
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Mandy was squeezing her boobs in the reflection of one of the grocery store's beverage freezers. Parker and Tamara were talking and pushing around a cart, putting every item of junk food they saw into it. They walked through the aisles while Mandy stared into the freezer.
PARKER- You know, Tam, maybe this whole mine-party thing isn't such a good idea.
TAMARA- Come on, if nobody says anything, then we won't get caught. Besides, the mine is way up in the hills. It's not like the cops will hear us up there.
PARKER- I don't know.. going to that place seems a little creepy.
TAMARA- Parker, the place isn't a haunted house. Calm down, we'll have fun and we'll look hot.
Mandy finally caught up with them.
MANDY- I never noticed that my breasts were so.. ample.
PARKER- Keep squeezing them like that and they're gonna turn into fizzing balloons.
MANDY (laughing)- They will not!!
Meanwhile, across the grocery store, Arash was putting dozens and dozens of 12-packs of beer in his shopping cart. He wheeled the cart up the aisle, only to bump into Tamara, Mandy and Parker. Tamara quickly gave him attitude.
TAMARA- Oh, look who it is! Anal Rash!! What's up? Going solo from the Geek Squad?
ARASH- Hello, Malibu Barbie. Getting prepped to catch an STD at the party tonight?
TAMARA- Please, Mr. Thrift Store. We'll have our match of insults tonight, don't you worry.
ARASH (sarcastic)- I'll be waiting for it, princess.
Arash pushed his cart passed them.
ARASH- Bye, Parker! See you tonight!
PARKER- Bye!
Arash wheeled his cart to the front of the store. Tamara quickly glared at Parker.
PARKER- What?
TAMARA- What was that all about?
PARKER- Forgive me for being nice. He's pretty cool.
TAMARA- Being nice? Parker, if I was friends with every Pam, Beth, and Sherry just because they were "cool", I'd have Noah's fu**cking Arc in my phonebook!
PARKER (sighing)- Whatever, Tam. You love me nonetheless.
TAMARA- Yeah, I do, but you're going too far with the nerd-befriending!
MANDY- Can we just get this shopping thing over with? We still have to get ready!
Arashw as at the checkout counter. A dorky bagger was behind the counter. He looked at Arash through bottlecap glasses.
DORK- I see you have, er, a lot of, er, alcohol, er... I'm, er, gonna, have, to, er, see, some, ID.
ARASH (smiling)- Of course!
Arash showed the dork an ID card. The ID was the fakest ID ever- It had a picture of a fat kid with freckles. The name read Horton Boggwatter.
DORK- This doesn't look like you!
ARASH- Oh, about that, that's how I used to look before I lost the baby fat.
The dork looked closer.
DORK- Oh, you're right! I can see the resemblance!
ARASH- I know, right?
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Arash was walking down the street, holding the bags of beer. The sun was beginning to dim a little. He checked his watch. It was going on 5:00. He was blaring Rolling Stones on his iPod and was walking fast down the empty pavement. All of a sudden, his iPod slipped out of his pocket, disconnecting from his headphones.
ARASH- Damn it!
He reached down to pick it up. All of a sudden, he heard faint moaning sounds.
ARASH- What the hell?
He stood up and saw that the moaning sounds were coming from Old Man Happy's house. The moans continued, and each one was more deeper than the last.
ARASH- I wonder if he's okay...
ARASH (rietjie-1) You have a choice to make!!!
Should Arash:
A) Go to Happy's house to see what the problem is
B) Ignore it, Happy's probably just getting lucky and you have a party to get ready for
C) Shout out to Happy
Don't worry, these aren't life or death choices. This is just to move along the storyline. LOD's probably won't kick in for another scene or two. 48 hours to respond.
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Scene eight
Arash was in the middle of the street, and decided to shout out to Happy. It was the least he could do.
ARASH (shouting)- Happy!!!!! Are you alright, old man??!!
The moaning sounds began to fade. Arash checked his watch. It was time to get a move on.
ARASH (to himself)- Ah, it's probably just arthritis or something.
And with those words, he continued to walk down the street, into the dimming sunlight.
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Old Man Happy was tossing and turning on the ground. He had fallen off of the couch while taking a nap. His half empty bottle of Jack Daniels was rolling back and forth across the hardwood floor, and the entire house was full of the stench of alcohol.
HAPPY- Sh*t!!! My back!!!
He staggered off of the ground. He looked at the clock on his wall. It was going on 5:30.
HAPPY- I've been sleepin' for that long?
At that moment, he heard a creaking noise coming from his front porch. Happy stared at his closed front door and wondered who was behind it outside.
HAPPY- Who's out there?
The creaks got louder and louder.
HAPPY- Damn kids!!!!
He rushed to the closet and pulled out his mahogany shotgun. He limped to the front door and swung it open, with the gun raised. The entire street and Town's Square was empty and quiet. Only the sound of birds chirping and the whistling noises of the breeze.
HAPPY- Where are yeh, ya little bastards??! I know yeh out here!!!!!
No one was in sight.
HAPPY (laughing to himself)- Damn Harry Warden... Hahaha, got me aiming at shadows..
Happy turned around and walked back into his house, shutting the door back. He staggered into the livingroom, dragging the shotgun across the floor. Then he heard heavy breathing.
HAPPY- Who the-
He turned around and the dull end of a pickax came crashing into his throat, sending him to the ground. Happy clutched his stinging neck. The miner was standing before him, glaring down at him through the gas mask.
HAPPY (stammering)- Harry-- Harry- It is you...
The miner raised the pickax again and Happy quickly slid out of the way and the ax splintered into the ground. Happy tried to reach for his shotgun but the miner twisted his arm back.
HAPPY- NOOOO!!!
The miner put his foot on Happy's back, pinning him to the ground and raised the pickax.
HAPPY- NOOO!!! SH!TTT!!!!! SH!TTTT!!! NOOO!!!
The miner swang the ax into the back of Happy's neck and dug it deeper and deeper until his head severed. The miner looked out of Happy's window and saw the that the sun was going tired. He wasn't through yet. There was a whole night ahead.
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Joseph's mom, Karin, was a hyper mess. She was standing by his bedroom door, looking at him finishing buttoning up his suit in the mirror. Joseph was nervous, but was feeling like a million bucks.
KARIN- Look at my baby!!! You're going to your first dance and you look so handsome! Andie!! Andie, get the camera!!
JOSEPH- Mom, you don't have to take pictures-
KARIN- Oh, come on, don't be ridiculous. Hush!
At that moment, Joseph could hear his goraning sister coming down the hallway.
ANDIE (offscreen)- Mom, it's just a stupid Valentine's dance, not his graduation!
Andie appeared at the doorway with the Polaroid camera. Andie and Joseph were complete opposites. She was 18, a senior, and very unappealing. She had hard stringy hair, catastrophic acne and braces that she didn't take care of. She was obsessed with Cobra Starship and hated the color pink.
KARIN- Andie, honey, why don't you grow a heart and support your little brother? This is his first dance and I have to- I just have to take a picture of this! Smile, Joseph!
Joseph put on an embarassed half smile while his mother snapped and snapped away with the camera.
KARIN- You better show off your dance mvoes, too!
Andie started laughing hardly.
ANDIE- Mom, they'll be playing pop crap, not Mozart and ballroom!
KARIN- Young lady, will you please can it with the negativity?!
JOSEPH- I hope everything goes perfect. It took me awhile to get the suit that was just right, you know? I have to make a good impression on everybody.
KARIN- Don't worry, honey, you will. I'll go downstairs so you can finish getting ready.
Karin left the bedroom and trotted down the hall, leaving Joseph and Andie alone.
ANDIE- Joseph, you better be damn lucky that I'm covering for you! If she knew that the party was really at those creepy mines-
JOSEPH- Fine, whatever. What do you want, Andie?
ANDIE- Well, first off, I need new Converses and black nail polish, and-
JOSEPH- I'm not made of cash. The shoes and the polish, and that's it.
ANDIE- Fine, I'll take it.. But, what are you so excited about? Do you have a date or something?
JOSEPH- Andie, get out!
ANDIE- Oh my God!! Are you going to dance with Liz??? Awww, half of your fantasy came true! Now all you have to do is get Luke-
JOSEPH- Andie, shut up!
Andie cracked up with laughter and walked out of the room.
JOSEPH- God, she's so annoying... She's the one who scares guys all the time! She couldn't get a boyfriend if she tried.
ANDIE (offscreen)- I heard that!
Joseph scoffed and went to his bedroom window to look out. He had an amazing view of his street and he saw a group of kids, nicely dressed, looking as if they were walking to the mines to get an early start on the party. Joseph smiled.
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Eric was sitting on the back trunk of a rundown car parked in the Lovers Lane parking lot. He was going back and forth through his head. Liz, please don't make me do anything stupid.. Maybe I shouldn't even go, just leave you there and I could be wrong about all of this... Wrong about it all.. But you're my sister and you deserve to be safe.. Liz.. He was an emotional wreck. The breeze began to blow harder. The parking lot was in the mountains, where the air was much cooler. On the other side of the mountains were the mines. Eric could hear faint shouting noises coming from the direction already.
ERIC- I just have to be sure.
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Scene nine
Eric was walking down the long street in the middle of the mountains of Reaper's Curve that led to the mine. On the sides of the road were the forests of the hill that looked as if they could go on forever. The road he walked on was paved with rusty rocks. Eric could hear some cars approaching from behind him. He moved to the side and started waving.
ERIC- Hey! Hey! Can I get a lift?!
When the car started getting closer, Eric saw that it was a Jeep full of already-drunken teenagers. There were ten girls and five guys cramped into the car.
ERIC- Hey! Are you guys headed to the mines? Can I get a lift-
Before he finished talking, he was already choking on the dirt clouds left behind from their speeding tires.
ERIC (loudly)- Brain adead a$$holes!
He wiped the dirt away from his eyes. Then, another pair of car lights began to creep up from behind him. The car was an old pickup truck, with a busted headlight. The truck finally stopped next to Eric.
ERIC- Hi there! I could, um, use a lift if it's okay!
The passenger window of the truck rolled down. A buff redneck man with a flappy trucker cap was sitting inside. His eyes were bloodshot.
PICKUP DRIVER- What are you doing out here, buddy?
ERIC- I was actually heading up to the mines. There's a party there-
PICKUP DRIVER- A party. There's always a damn party! Haven't you people learned after that Harry Warden went and sliced up all of those kids?
ERIC- Um, well-
PICKUP DRIVER- Don't sweat it, guy. I'll give you a lift. Just let me grab something here...
The driver reached up to the ceiling of the truck. All of a sudden, he pulled down a giant 20-barrel shotgun and pointed it at Eric's face. Eric's breath shortened and his eyes widened. The driver smiled, revealing a mouth full of nonexistent teeth.
DRIVER- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAH!!!!!!!!
Eric quickly ran down the path, away from the psycho driver in the truck. The sun was getting dimmer and dimmer by the second.
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Maria was jabbing Luke in the eyesocket with black eyeliner. They were in her cramped downstiars bathroom, with the counter littered with face and hair products.
LUKE- Maria, you're gonna poke my fu**cking eye out! Take it easy!
MARIA- Luke, I'm doing the best I can! Quit bitching!
LUKE- I'm not bitching! You're just hurting me!
Luke was dressed in his flamboyant glam-rock getup, with his hair gelled-up into a mohawk and glitter smeared all over his leathered clothes. Maria was dressed in a skimpy purple dress that cut off at her thighs with a pair of black Converses.
LUKE- When are we gonna get out of here?
MARIA- Luke, the sun is setting. When it's dark, we'll leave. We're gonna get Liz and Arash at the thift store and then drive up to the hill.
LUKE- Are you sure I look okay? How's my hair? Is it sexy?
MARIA (rolling her eyes)- Luke, you look like a drag queen but something tells me you like it.
LUKE- Maria, I'm serious! I'm gonna be performing-
MARIA- Luke, of course you look good. I'm the one who dressed you. But, anyways, how do I look? Do I look like I'm asking for it?
Luke eyed down Maria.
LUKE- Not only do you look like you're asking for it, you look like you're saying "Screw me in all three holes and paying me is an insult!"
Maria playfully threw a jug of powder at him.
MARIA- Luke, I am not a whore. I like boys and girls, so that just makes me hypersexual. There's a difference! I'm not like Tamara and her pron star floozies!
LUKE- Says the girl who does vagina exercises so her guy doesn't know that she got some the night before.
MARIA (cracking up)- You think you're so funny but you're not!
LUKE- I'm just joking around with you.
Luke started caking more green hair gel into his scalp.
LUKE- But we can't be too wild tonight. Liz has never really gone to a dance before and we don't wanna traumatize her by acting like animals.
MARIA- Look. Whatever happens in the mines, stays in the mines. If we get a few spiked punches in Liz, then she won't be such a party pooper.
LUKE- Spiked punches?? How are you gonna pull that off? Liz will probably be drinking nothing but non-alcoholic water.
MARIA- She's gotta leave Virgin-Land sooner or later.
LUKE- But then again, we need her and Arash- well, just her because Arash is a hot mess- to be the good one. A group full of partiers would make us no different than Mandy, Tamara, and Parker.
MARIA- Sure we're different! None of us has ever had an abortion.
LUKE (laughing)- You gotta point there.
MARIA- Alright, I'm gonna get my perfume.
Maria walked out of the tight bathroom, leaving Luke alone. He stared in the mirror. He saw that his black eye was still noticeable under his heavy makeup. He quickly picked up mascara and smeared it under his eye.
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Liz had all of the lights turned out at the thrift store. She was spinning around and dancing to the tunes coming from the store's radio. She was dressed in her dress for the dance and was in high spirits. Out of nowhere, she heard the faint sounds of sobbing. Liz turned around and saw the elderly Miss Mable standing at the entrance, turning the store lights back on. Liz rushed over to her.
LIZ- Miss Mable, I'm so sorry! I didn't mean to have the lights off, it's just that business had been so slow today-
MISS MABLE (in between tears)- No, Liz, it's fine.
LIZ- What's the matter? Why are you crying?
MISS MABLE- You just look so beautiful!
LIZ- Oh, thanks so much, Miss Mable!
MISS MABLE- I know that some people haven't had good experiences with Valentine's Day in the past and the dance is supposed to be canceled..
LIZ- Oh, Miss Mable, please-
MISS MABLE- Don't worry, Liz, I'm letting you off the hook. I know we could all get into a helluva lot of trouble but I know how hard you kids worked for this dance and well- just promise you'll be safe and have fun, alright?
LIZ- I promise.
MISS MABLE- I'll be here all night in case you need me.
Miss Mable smiled and walked to the checkout counters. At that moment, Joseph walked into the store. Liz saw that he had a bouquet of flowers.
LIZ- Oh, Joseph, you didn't!
JOSEPH- It's okay, I wanted to!
Joseph handed her the flowers. At that moment, Arash came sashaying into the thrift store, with his black hair slicked back, and wearing a pair of starched, ripped jeans, boots, sunglasses and a wife-beater under a suit jacket.
LIZ- Wow, Arash. Very, um, impressive with the punk look.
ARASH (full of himself)- That's what I do, baby!
JOSEPH (nervous)- Hey, um, how's it going, Arash?
ARASH- Oh, um, hi Jerry. How's it hanging?
JOSEPH- Um, actually it's Joseph.
ARASH- Of course it is! That's what I said.
LIZ- So, now, we're just waiting on Maria and Luke.
ARASH- Man, we're in for a night we won't forget!
LIZ- I hope you're right.
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The sky was turning into a bluish yellow. Mandy, Tamara and Parker were stepping off of the front porch of Mandy's house. Mandy's mom was waving happily at them as they approached Tamara's car. Mandy's dad was crying in tears.
MANDY'S MOM- Honey, what the hell is your problem?
MANDY'S DAD (sobbing)- They look like baby prostitutes!
MANDY'S MOM- Shut up! Don't ruin her night!
Mandy could barely hear them.
MANDY- Did you say something, mom and dad?
MANDY'S MOM- Oh, no, honey, just have fun!
The parents walked back into the house and shut the door. As soon as they stepped into the livingroom, they heard loud drilling sounds coming from the kitchen.
MANDY'S DAD- What the hell is that?
MANDY'S MOM- Maddie!!!!!!
The two of them rushed into the kitchen where they found the short, curly-haired cute-as-a-button Maddie, their youngest daughter. Maddie was shoving three Barbie dolls into the drilling grabage disposal, sending thick pieces of plastic sputtering all over the kitchen.
MANDY'S MOM- Maddie, young lady, what do you think you're doing!!
MADDIE- I don't want Mandy to leave! I wanted her to play with me!
MANDY'S MOM- Honey-
Mandy's dad went to the garbage disposal and turned it off.
MANDY'S MOM- Maddie, when you get to be her age, you'll undertsand. Mandy just wants to have fun. Messing up your dolls won't help the matter. Come on, let's go upstairs and watch some cartoons.
Mandy's mother took Maddie up the staircase and the father followed. We zoom in on the cut up Barbie dolls in the kitchen sink. There are two blonde ones, and a black one with brunette hair.
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Mandy, Tamara and Parker were sitting in Tamara's sports car right outside of the house. Tamara had on a purple silk shirt and short white shorts with spiked heels. Mandy had on a tight shimmering blue minidress with matching heels and Parker was clad in a black mini dress with red pumps. They all were dressed to kill. Tamara was obsessing over her face in the car's rearview mirror, while Mandy munched on barbeque Corn Nuts in the backseat.
MANDY- Oh my God! These are so good! What took me so long to start eating these? Do you want some, Tam?
TAMARA- No, no nuts for me, thanks.
Tamara turned on the radio, and the "Hot Probs" radio show was on, supported by the voices of the personalities Lulu and Melanie.
LULU (voice on radio)- Well, hello to everyone in Valentine's Bluffs!! The time is here! Valentine's Day and time to party hearty!
MELANIE (voice on radio)- Lulu, if you're talking about that dance, it got canceled.
LULU- Oh come on, Melanie, those kids in that town are gonna find some way to party, mark my words. Everyone, send in your requests for the night!
MELANIE- We love you!
Parker was tapping her finger on her arm uncontrollably. She was nervous.
TAMARA- That damn radio bitch Lulu better keep her mouth shut. What if the sheriff and the mayor were listening?
MANDY- Come on, those old geezers would not be listening to "Hot Probs".
Tamara looked over at Parker.
TAMARA- Parker, what's up with you?
PARKER (snapping out of it)- What? Oh, there's nothign wrong. Let's just go to the party.
TAMARA- Parker, you whore, why do you lie to me?
PARKER- It's just that I was having second thoughts about this whole thing. What if the cops show up? What if they throw us in jail or some sh!t?
TAMARA- Parker, nothing like that is gonna happen. At least not to the three of us. Just stay away from the punch and pills and you won't be stripping and slurring on someone's computer tomorrow. That's we really should be worried about.
MANDY- You guys, we are wasting valuable party time by sitting in my parking lot.
TAMARA (sucking up)- I love you, Parker. Don't you love me?
PARKER (sighing)- You're the only man I've ever loved.
TAMARA- Ha ha, Parker. Now, are we all ready?
PARKER- Yeah, I am.
TAMARA- Mandy?
MANDY- Hang on a minute.
Mandy grabbed her top and tore it down the middle, revealing more of her chest.
MANDY- Now I'm ready to rock and roll.
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The doors to the rec-room building were kicked open and swarms of teens flooded inside. Boxes of hot dog and hamburger buns were put on tables and the kids who were cooking brought the food into the back kitchen. There were winndows everywhere, nearly twenty tables and dozens of chairs, a pool table and a television that hung in the corner of the ceiling. The entire building was one floor and was built like a gym. Music quickly started bumping. The kids looked out of the windows at the boarded up mine tunnels. Punch and liquor were being poured together into juice bowls. A disco ball started getting tossed in the air through the crowd. The party had begun.
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Scene ten
Kids were bellowing in laughter while they were looking at Joseph dancing with Liz. The two of them stuck out like a sore thumb amongst the drunk, popular crowd that were dancing in the middle of the rec room. Luke and his androgynous band of glam rockers were belting out rock tunes at the front of the room.
JOSEPH- Liz, why are they laughing at us?
LIZ- Joseph, ignore them. They don't matter.
The kids continued laughing.
KID #1- Hey, Liz, having fun with Mister Fat Ass over there?
KID #2- Yeah, don't choke on his rolls!
LIZ (pissed)- Why don't you drunk a$$holes get a life and leave us alone?? Come on, Joseph!
Liz dragged Joseph by the hand away from the dancefloor.
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Sheriff Chewie was stuffing his face with Valentine's chocolates that the Mayor had brought to his office. No calls were coming into the police department, and it seemed that it would be a mellow night.
CHEWIE- Mayor, these chocolates really hit the spot!
MAYOR- Yeah, the wife gets them from this really nice candy shoppe.
CHEWIE- I have to say, I'm really glad that this night is going as planned after we canceled the dance. No more bullsh!t.
MAYOR- But we still have to stop who's been killing people. We can't think that he'll just leave us alone because we canceled the dance, Harry wants revenge!
CHEWIE- Mayor, it's been eleven years. Harry is dead.
MAYOR- No, no, no, Sheriff. No. They neevr found his body despite what the reports say.
At that moment, a police officer entered the sheriff's office holding a huge gift box wrapped in pink and red wrapper.
OFFICER- Sheriff, this package came for you earlier. I forgot it was here.
CHEWIE- Thanks, Voorhees.
The officer left and the mayor and sheriff stared at the box on his desk.
CHEWIE- I wonder what it is.
MAYOR- Well, open it.
Chewie sat up and tore the wrapper from the box. He cautiously pulled open the lid and jumped back as soon as he saw what was inside.
MAYOR- What? What is it?
The Mayor looked inside and saw the severed head of Happy in the box. A note was inside.
MAYOR- Oh my God!!!!!!! He killed Happy!
The sheriff grabbed the note and read it.
SHERIFF (reading aloud)- "You didn't stop the party"...
The mayor's eyes widened.
MAYOR- PARTY?! WHAT GADAMNED PARTY??
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Luke was putting down his microphone. Arash and Maria raced to him as he was approaching the punch table.
MARIA- Luke, you were awesome!
LUKE- Was I?
ARASH- I'm not into the 80's glitter glam stuff because I'm more into Rolling Stones but yeah, you rocked up there.
LUKE- Where's Liz?
ARASH- She's busy with her date. That chunky ballet kid.
LUKE- Arash, that was really mean.
ARASH- Come on, I was just describing him. Johnny is actually kind of cool once you get to know him.
MARIA- His name is Joseph, Arash!
ARASH- Whatever.
Arash grabbed a cup full of liquor punch and sucked it down.
In the rec building's bathroom, Tamara, Mandy and Parker were playing with their hair while looking in the mirrors.
TAMARA- You guys, this party isn't as good as I thought it was gonna be.
MANDY- Yeah, and the booze sucks ass.
PARKER- So what? Do you wanna leave?
TAMARA- Well, no. We didn't drive all the way up here for nothing. I heard that some kids are gonna go in the mine.
MANDY- Are you serious?
TAMARA- Yeah, that sounds like fun.
PARKER- No one's been in those tunnels in over a decade. It's underneath the ground and eww! It's not safe down there!
TAMARA- Come on, Parker. Mandy and I will be there. Be brave.
Mandy and Tamara finished up and went to leave the bathroom.
MANDY- We'll be upstairs waiting for you, Parker.
TAMARA- Hurry up!
They left the bathroom, leaving Parker alone. She brushed her hair while looking in the mirror and started putting on mascara.
PARKER (to herself)- I should be at home studying, not dicking around in a fu**cking abandoned mine.
Parker tried to put on some lipstick but the stick fell out of the container.
PARKER- Ugh! I hate cheap lipstick!
At that moment, she heard someone approaching the hallway outside the bathroom.
PARKER (calling out)- Hey, this bathroom is occupied!
The footsteps continued and the bathroom door started to creak open. A gloved hand shut the bathroom's lights off.
PARKER (pissed)- Alright, a$$hole, quit playing games!
She heard heavy breathing and saw a bright light circling in the dark. She turned around and saw the miner standing there, with his helmet light beaming down on her.
PARKER- AAAAAAIIIIIIIEEEEEE!!!!!!!
She quickly ducked as he swang the pickax into the mirror, shattering glass shards. Parker darted into the hallway and tried to open the double doors that led into the party room, but they were chained shut. Ther music was booming so loud, no one could hear her scream.
PARKER- Oh no! No!!!
The miner appeared in the hallway. Parker ran to the unchained door at the end of the hall. She kicked it open and ran outside into the woods. The miner quickly followed. Parker could barely see in the darkness. She tore off her heels and ran down a road. She saw a building. A broke down abandoned skating rink. There were no doors and Parker hurried inside. She found herself standing in the middle of the wooden skating platform. There were many loose wooden planks in the floor. Parker bent down and grabbed a rusty plank. She looked around the dark, abandoned rink. The miner was nowhere to be found. Before she made her next move, speakers suddenly were turned on. The lights in the ceiling were turned on. Rainbow lights swirled around the building. Parker was terrified. The song playing was "Love Is A Battlefield" , and it played as Parker tried to find a place to hide. She ran into a hallway of the skating rink where the lockers for skates were. There were sitting benches in the hall. Parker dropped to the ground and rolled under a bench to hide. Tears streamed down her face as the song kept playing.
We are strong... Heart ache to heart ache... We stand...
Parker clutched the plank tightly.
Both of us know it.. Love is a battlefield...
She held her breath as she saw the miner's boots walking through the hall. He breathed angrily through the gas mask. He looked under all of the sitting benches and couldn't find Parker. It went silent. Parker let out a breath. She thought he had left. The song that echoed through the speakers finally came to an end.
CCCRRRRAASSHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The pickax came splintering through the bench and landed just inches from Parker's head. She quickly staggered off the ground and threw the plank at the miner's head, making him fall.
PARKER- Take that, you bastard!
She ran away from the skate lockers and tripped into the pizza kitchen of the skating rink. She looked around for a weapon as the miner came running into the kitchen. She quickly grabbed a pan and slammed it into his head. He tumbled hardly to the floor. Parker was running out of breath but kept running as fast as her heart could take her. The flashing rainbow lights from the ceiling were getting brighter and brighter. Parker ran across the skate platform but stopped when her eyes met something. She saw someone coming in the skating rink entrance. Someone she recognized.
PARKER- Hey, it's you ! Help me!
The person stood still as the miner came charging at Parker.
PARKER- Why are you standing there??!!! HELP ME!!!
The person did nothing. Parker turned to run back into the halls with the miner hot on her trail. She tried to open a manager's office door, but it wouldn't budge.
PARKER- Nooooo!!!!
She could sense a pickax rising from behind her. She was so down trodden, she couldn't even fight back anymore. She turned around and looked the miner in the mask.
PARKER- GO TO HELL!!!
He swang the pickax into her chest. She fell to the floor, dead as the rainbow lights shined down continously.
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The party was still resuming in the rec room. Maria was at the food table, preparing a hot dog when Tamara and Mandy came over.
MARIA (arcastic)- Oh, look, it's the Funbag Twins!
TAMARA- And look, it's Miss Dyke over here stuffing her face with hot dogs!
MANDY- Are you sure you should beating that? I mean, have you seen yuor body lately?
Maria grabbed a cup of her beer and threw it at Mandy and Tamara.
TAMARA- You bitch!
Tamara threw a cup of punch on her dress. Out of nowhere, Liz came over to the girls.
LIZ- Can you guys not fight? This is ridiculous!
MANDY- Don't blame us! She called us a name just because we were walking by her!
MARIA- The two of you can just eat sh!t!
Tamara came charging at Maria and started to pull her hair out. The kids at the party quickly took notice as the girls punched and slapped at each other. Liz and Mandy struggled to break them up as the entire party cheered on the fight.
LIZ- Maria! Tamara- STOP!
Mandy finally got a hold of Tamara and pulled her aside.
MANDY- Tam, calm down! She's not worth it!
TAMARA- I don't care! I can't stand that slut!
LIZ (to crowd)- Alright, everybody, nothing to see here! Show's over!
The kids got back to the party and Liz walked with Maria outside. Arash and Luke went outside to join them. Joseph hurried and followed.
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Maria and Liz were cooling down outside of the rec room, along with Arash, Luke and Joseph.
ARASH- Maria, my hat goes off to you. You beat the hell out of that-
LIZ- Stop, Arash. Don't encourage her.
MARIA- Listen, I'm fine. I'm over it. I'm still ready to party.
LIZ- Okay, fine, let's go back inside.
JOSEPH- Hey, I got a great idea!
LUKE- What is it?
JOSEPH- The mine!
At that moment, a group of kids came running and laughing out of the rec room. Most of them were holding bats and sticks.
LUKE- Are they doing what I think they're doing?
The kids ran over to the boarded up mine and started beating in the nailed boards.
KID #1- We're going in the mine tonight!!
KID #2- WOOOOOOHHHOHOHHOO!!!!!!
The whole party cleared out of the rec room and kids spilled out into the yard outside to watch the mine being broken in.
CHOICES FOR TAMARA, MANDY, ARASH, MARIA, LIZ, LUKE & JOSEPH ( Rietjie-1, Baby Claire, Speeders, SexyLicious_Boy_xxx, magic 400 & StevieMc) -- You have a choice to make! Should you all:
A- Go into the mine
B- Don't go into the mine
Read carefully. The killer is still on the surface. No matter what, you'll all still be ina group but the chocies determine how long the killer will take to get to you. If you all pick the same choice, you all get the same fate, if you each choose differently, you each will get the individual fate you choose. The next scene will have upfront LOD Choices.
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Eric Poole was watching the party from behind a tree outside. He saw the crowd of kids gathered outside and the other kids breaking down the boards on the mine.
ERIC- Those stupid buzzheads are gonna go underneath the ground! Twelve thousand feet deep! I gotta help Liz--
ERIC POOLE (We Band Of Buggered)- You have a chocie to make!
Should Eric:
A- Sneak into the mine to follow the kids, unnoticed
B- Come out of hiding and confront Liz
C- Stay on the surface
Same story forwarding choices.
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15 years ago
Scene eleven
Liz, Maria, Joseph, Luke, Arash, Tamara & Mandy were entering the tunnel of the mine as the crowd of partying kids cheered them on from outside. The boards that once concealed the mine's entrance were scattered across the ground. The coarse air of the tunnel quickly sank into the seven kid's nostrils. The tunnels were made of worn tin and the ceiling lights were flickering dimly. They were about to give out from glowing for over ten years. The kids walked deeper and deeper inside, away from the shouting voices, and the ground got rockier and rockier with each step they took.
MANDY (nervous)- Um, I'm getting a little creped out by this place. Should'nt we go back to the party and find Parker?
TAMARA- Mandy, quit being a pussy! We'll find Parker after we do this first.
MANDY- But she's been gone a really long time.
TAMARA- She didn't want to come in the mine anyway.
Mandy stared in the mine's tunnel. Her stomach stirred. Behind a tree by the rec room, Eric was watching the kids go inside.
ERIC (to himself)- I'll wait for the perfect time to sneak in..
The kids approached the mine's railcarts that sat on a railtrack that led in a downward slope into darkness.
LUKE- Wow, this is it!
MARIA- It is so dark down there!
LIZ- Um, guys, do we know how far these carts will take us? Are they even safe to get into?
JOSEPH- Sure they are! There's the control panel on the wall over there!
ARASH- Cool!
Arash rushed over to the control panel and looked for the switch to start the railcars. The kids all stepped in the carts and sat down.
MARIA- This is gonna be so gnarly! I wonder what's down there!
Liz started shivering. It was deathly cold in the mine.
LIZ- You know, on second thought, I'm gonna stay up at the party-
MARIA- Oh, no, honey, if I'm going down there, you're coming with me!
LIZ (sighing)- Fine.
ARASH- Alright, everybody, we're just having one quick ride down and one back up!
Arash pressed a switch and all of a sudden, a loud whirring noise occured. The wheels on the carts started turning. Arash jumped in a cart as the wagons moved down the track. The kids all screamed in excitement as they rode down the steep rail track. Dust fell from the rocky ceiling as they got further down.
TAMARA- Eww!!! Dust just got in my hair!
Maria rolled her eyes.
MARIA (to herself)- Stupid bitch.
The mine got as dark as night. The kids could barely see or make out anything in the darkness. The cars bumpily rode on.
LUKE- Damn it, it's cold! We could get hypothermia from going down here!
TAMARA- Shut up, no we won't!
LIZ- We actually could. Nobody's been down here in years.
TAMARA (irked)- Why couldn't I come down here with cool people?
LIZ- Whatever, Tamara. Life is too short to be a bitch.
TAMARA- Well, honey, it works for me.
ARASH (sarcastic)- Ouch, comeback!
TAMARA- Shut up!
The carts went further and further down the track.
LIZ (jittering)- You guys, I'm really not liking this. I wanna go back up now.
JOSEPH- Don't worry,Liz. We'll be fine.
At that moment, the carts stopped moving. They were in the heart of the mine. Underneath the earth. There were two corridors, one at each side of the railtrack. The kids all jumped out of the carts.
MANDY- This is so creepy.
They looked at the rotting walls and the flickering lights. They could hear the echoes of trickling water.
LUKE- Which way are we going? Left or right?
MANDY (chuckling)- Which way do you go, Luke? To the left or to the right?
Tamara and Mandy hooted with laughter.
LUKE (rolling his eyes)- Wow, two twits with a wit.
Arash reached in a railcar and pulled out a rusty flashlight. He smacked it around until it began glowing.
ARASH- Let's go to the right.
The seven kids walked through the right corridor. They walked further and further down. The kids were wide eyed, taking in the ruined atmosphere.
LUKE- This place is so bizarre. It looks like the town just sealed everything up without taking anything out.
MARIA- Do you blame them? Everyone says this place is haunted.
LIZ- Which makes us pretty damn stupid to come down here.
ARASH- Oh, look!
Arash saw a wall that had a row of lockers attached to it. The locker doors were all loose and he went over to the wall.
MARIA- Arash, I wouldn't stick my hand in one of those.. There's rats all over this place.
MANDY- Rats?? Rats?! Nobody ever said there were rats down here!
TAMARA- It is a mine, genius.
ARASH- Come on, please. Nothing's gonna happen to me. Look- AAAARRRGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!
Arash's hand was inside one of the lockers and something was pulling his hand inside violently. Arash's arm shook horribly. The kids panicked.
LIZ- Oh my God!!!
MARIA- Somebody help him!
MANDY- He's gonna die!!
Luke and Joseph grabbed Arash and tried to pull him away from the lockers. Arash screamed in agony.
ARASH- WILL YOU GUYS FU**CKING HELP ME??!! IT HURTS!!
They pulled and pulled with all of their might. At that moment, Arash started chuckling.
ARASH (bellowing in laughter)- You should've seen the looks on your faces!! You guys are idiots, man!
Arash pulled his hand out of the locker. He was holding an old miner's helmet. All of the kids were pissed at him.
LIZ- Arash, you a$$hole, that wasn't funny!
MARIA- That was so not cool. You are so foul.
ARASH- Oh come on, I was just kidding around. What do you think was in that locker, anyway? A venus flytrap or some sh!t?
Arash lifted the helmet up for everyone to see. A small flashlight was attached to the top of it.
ARASH- Look at this old piece of junk. We should've brought a camera or something so we could show everybody what it looks like down here.
MARIA- Yeah, let's look at other stuff.
The kids walked further ahead. They walked over old torn flyers that advertised the Valentine's Dance eleven years ago.
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A topless blonde girl kicked the door to the rec room's kitchen open. Everyone on the dance floor quickly turned around to her in confusion. Her face was in tears and blood was smeared on her naked breasts.
TOPLESS GIRL- AAAAAGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! He's- He's He's in there!!!!!!
Some kids stopped dancing and rushed over to her.
KID #1- What's the problem?? Why are you so bloody??
KID #2- Just calm down and tell us what's wrong!
TOPLESS GIRL- I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I I went to meet my boyfriend so we could hook up in the kitchen and he-he-he-he-he HE'S IN THERE!!!!!! I FOUND HIM IN THERE!!!
KID #1- Alright, I'm gonna go check it out.
The kid walked away and entered the dark kitchen. He looked around and saw nothing. The kitchen was empty and the only sound occuring was coming from a pot overboiling with water. The kid then set his eyes on the refrigerator at the end of the kitchen. Bloody handprints were littered across the door handle. He speeded up to it and opened the door. His eyes widened and his dinner quickly rised to his stomach from what he saw.
KID #1- Oh God!!
A bloody, mutilated corpse of the topless girl's boyfriend was cramped in the fridge, with his entire chest savagely ripped open. A meat cleaver was lodged in his forehead. The kid screamed and knocked over the top of the overboiling pot on the stove. Inside was a gray, fat, boiled human heart.
Kid #1- AAAAARRRRRGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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The entrance doors of the rec room were flung open and we see dozens of the partying teenagers rush out in droves. They are screaming and falling over each other. They rush into their cars and engines are revved up. The party was being abandoned.
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We are in a dark room in the mine. A cracked mirror sits on a rocky stone wall. A person stands by the door of the room, with their arms crossed. Another person sits at a chair in the middle of the room. The person speaks in a hissing whisper.
PERSON- Everyone is in the mine.... Everyone on the surface should have discovered the boy's body by now, which leaves us completely alone in the mountains... just as we planned. Now is the time. They can run, but they have nowhere to hide, I've made sure of that. You just get them when I tell you.. Every last single one of them.. I'll take care of everything.. Just as I've always done.
The person leaves the room and walks back out into the mine's corridor. The miner, sitting in the chair, angrily clutched his pickax.
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Mandy and Tamara were trying to get their cellphones to work. They had gone off on their own from the group, and were in a corridor, where an abandoned office of the supervisors was at the end of the hallway. Mandy, pissed, stuffed her unresponsive cellphone back into her tight bra.
MANDY- Face it, Tam. We're not getting any reception down here.
TAMARA- We never should've gone off on our own. Now we're lost! It's a fu**cking maze down here!
MANDY (calling out)- Arash!!! Luke!!! Anyone??
No answer. Her voice bounced off of the tin walls.
MANDY- I told you this was a bad idea!
TAMARA- You did not! You wanted to come into the mine!
MANDY- Because you made me! Everything you want to do, me and Parker automatically have to do it or you turn into a pirahna mega-bitch!
TAMARA- What the hell are you talking about? You never had a problem with it before.
MANDY- Because we were never lost in a mine before, Tam! We gotta find our way back to the geeks. Damn it, I can't believe we're lost! And Parker is still probably at the top, wondering what's taking us so long!
TAMARA- Mandy, if you would just shut up and calm down, we'll find our way back! Besides, we both know that I'm the one that's gonna get us out of it. You're always thinking with your boobs.
MANDY (pissed)- Bitch!
At that moment, some brushing sounds bounced off of the sensitive walls.
MANDY- What was that?
TAMARA- Maybe it's the geeks!!
Tamara and Mandy ran further down the corridor where the sounds were coming from.
MANDY- Hello??? Anyone?
TAMARA- Is anyone there?
All of a sudden, two figures came out from around the corner and bumped into Tamara and Mandy, who immediately started screaming.
LIZ- Will you guys calm down?
MARIA- What's the deal?
It was only Liz and Maria. All of the girls were now in the same place.
MANDY- Oh my God!! I've never been more excited to see you two before in my life!
TAMARA- We're lost!
LIZ- Yeah, so are we. We were all walking down this dark tunnel, and couldn't make out anything. Everyone got scattered all over the place and I was on my own until I finally found Maria.
MARIA- So, I see you guys are regretting you left the group in the first place, huh?
TAMARA (irked)- Just shut the fu**ck up, okay? I know there's egg on my face, so you don't have to rub it in. Now, this is perfect! All of the guys are missing and we're down here by ourselves!
LIZ- We gotta find our way back to the railcars!
TAMARA- Isn't there a fu**cking "You Are Here" poster around here somewhere?
LIZ- Don't worry. We'll find our way out. Which way should we go?
MANDY- How about right?
TAMARA- Mandy, going right is what got us lost here in the first place!
MANDY- Fine, whatever.
All of a sudden, the four girls heard crashing sounds.
CRRRRASSSHHHHHHHH!!!!
CRRAAASSSHHHH!!!!
TAMARA- What the hell was that?
MANDY- It was probably a rat.
TAMARA- That ain't a damn rat!
CRRAASSSHHHHH
LIZ- Is that sound coming closer?
We see the miner coming down the mine shaft, shattering every ceiling light, plunging the tunnels into darkness.
MANDY- I'm actually getting kind of scared.
MARIA- Come on, everybody, let's move.
The crashing sounds suddenly stopped. The girls walked ahead. They anticipated turning the corner at the end of the hall. When they got to the end of the corridor, all of the lights in the tunnel simmered and died. They were in pitch darkness.
MANDY- Sh!t!!! What is going on??
LIZ- Do any of you girls have a cellphone? We can use it as a light!
Tamara flipped open her phone and the backlight shined, letting them see where they were going. All of a sudden, a pickax rised in the darkness and swang at the girls, hitting the wall. The girls shrieked.
MANDY- AAAIIIEEEE!!!!!
MARIA- OH MY GOD!!!
LIZ- Guys, come on, we gotta run!!
The miner snatched his pickax out of the wall as the girls darted back down the corridor. Tamara and Mandy spotted the abandoned supervisor's office that they had seen earlier.
TAMARA- In there!!!! Hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tamara and Mandy were running ahead of Liz and Maria. They reached the office and pried it's rusty door open. They fell inside. There was a giant window in the front of the office. Mandy bumped against the door. The door closed shut, locking them inside.
MANDY- Oh my God!!!!!!!!!!! Liz and Maria!!!!
TAMARA- Come on, quick, we gotta open it!!
Tamara and Mandy tried to open the door, but it wouldn't budge. Liz and Maria were frantically sreaming outside as the miner sadistically and slowly walked towards them.
LIZ- Tamara!!!!! Open the dooor!!!!!!!!!!
MARIA- You bitches!!!!!! We're locked out!!!!!
Tamara and Mandy tugged and tugged on the handle. The soles of their hands were bruising.
TAMARA- They're gonna die!!!!!!
Liz and Maria banged and banged on the office door from the outside. The miner was getting closer.
LIZ AND MARIA (Magic 400 & Baby Claire)-- You have a choice to make!!
Should the girls:
A- Try to break the door in and hide inside the office with Tam & Mandy
B- Fight the killer off
C- Forget about the office and run into the left corridor
Two choices equal death. One equals survival.
TAMARA AND MANDY ( SexyLicious_Boy_xxx & Speeders)-- You have a choice to make!!!!!!
Should the girls:
A- Search for a weapon to fight the killer if he gets inside
B- Continue pulling on the door to let Liz and Maria inside
C- Find a spot to hide in the office
Two choices equal death. One equals survival.
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Scene twelve
The miner was storming down the tunnel's corridor, with every bit of his rage aimed solely at Liz and Maria. They were still desperately trying to get the office door open.
LIZ (panicking)- Oh my God, Maria, what are we gonna do!?!
Maria looked back at the approaching miner.
MARIA- Fu**ck this!
Maria snatched a decaying pipe from the ground.
MARIA- Liz, you might wanna go. Go find the guys.
LIZ- Maria, no!
MARIA- Go! We don't have time, damn it!!
Tamara and Mandy were banging on the office's window. They saw Liz running into the left corridor. Maria was running after the killer.
TAMARA- NO! NOOOO!!!! MARIA, WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING???NO!
MANDY- We gotta help her!
TAMARA- Keep pulling on the door! I'm gonna try to find something to break the window.
Maria swang the pipe at the miner's head. The miner quickly fell to the ground. Maria thrust the pipe at him again. The miner grabbed one of her ankles and snatched it, tumbling her to the ground. Maria crawled over to the miner and kept striking him with the pipe. The miner's head began to bleed. Maria brought herself off the ground but the miner snatched her down again. He began to drag her across the rocky ground. Maria spotted the pickax lying not too far from her. She tried to grab it, but the miner drug her further and further away from it. Maria kicked and kicked at the miner's hands. He moved and grabbed her by the hair and slammed her head against the tunnel's tin wall. Maria screamed in pain as he retrieved his pickax from the ground. She held her head as the miner swang the ax at her. She quickly ducked, and he missed. Maria staggered off the ground but the miner quickly caught up with her. He snatched her head back. Tamara and Mandy banged on the window glass, helplessly.
TAMARA- Maria, hit him!!!!!
MANDY- Come on, get outta there!!
Maria elbowed the miner in his chest. She saw a rusty wheelbarrow at the side of the wall. She quickly ran to it and wheeled it into the miner. Tamara and Mandy cheered her on from inside the office.
TAMARA- Yes, Maria, you got it!!!
MANDY- Run!!
The miner swang the pickax and sent the wheelbarrow flying in the other direction, and Maria crashed to the ground.
MARIA (screaming)- Nooo!!!! Nooo!! You can't have me, you sick bastard!!!
The miner swang the pickax at Maria, but she rolled out of the way. He swang again, but she got to her feet.
TAMARA- RUNNN!!!!
The miner swang the pickax at Maria, slicing her back open. She fell to the ground, shrieking in agony.
TAMARA (sobbing)- Noooooo!!!!
The miner buried the pickax into Maria's neck. Maria spit blood onto the miner's mask. Her eyes closed. Tamara and Mandy sank to the ground in the office, crying.
TAMARA- Damn, damn, damn, damn, damn, DAMMMNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MANDY- What are we going to do??!!
TAMARA- If that a$$hole tries to get in here, I have this.
Tamara showed Mandy a hefty hammer that she found. Mandy and Tamara rose back up to look through the office window. They could see that in the tunnel, the miner had disappeared. Maria's mangled body lied on the ground, alone.
MANDY- He's gone!
TAMARA- Are you fu**cking serious??!
They looked more closely to be sure. No one was in sight.
MANDY- What do you want to do?
TAMARA- We can't stay in this office all night. We gotta get with the others so we can get back to the surface.
MANDY- But, we don't even know where they are. Besides, it's not safe, that killer is still out there!
TAMARA- Well, Mandy, I'm tired of being selfish. If we stay in here, he's gonna get everybody else and let's face it; you and me are no match for him.
All of a sudden, the office door started vibrating.
BOOM. BOOM. BOOOM.
MANDY- Oh sh!t!
The door was being violently banged on from the other side.
BOOOM. BOOOM. BOOOM.
MANDY- He's trying to get inside!!!!!!!!
All of a sudden, the pickax came splintering into the door, sending wood shards flying. Tamara spotted the office desk.
TAMARA- Come on, Mandy, help me move this!
MANDY- Tamara, he's gonna get in-
TAMARA- Just help me, damn it!!
Tamara and Mandy swiped everything clean off of the desk as the door kept being broken down. They struggled to push the table against the door. The door was being ripped off of it's hinges. They slammed the table against the office door. The miner struggled to tear the door down.
MANDY- Fu**ck off, you degenerate!!!!!!!!
The door suddenly stopped shaking. Tamara and Mandy lookd at each other in silence.
MANDY- Do you think he left?
TAMARA- We fell for that sh!t last time, remember?
MANDY- Tamara, who do you think it is? Who's doing this? Is it Harry Warden?
TAMARA- Mandy, this is some sick fu**ck that's doing this. Probably that old skeez, Happy.
MANDY- I'm scared, Tam. I'm scared.
Tamara and Mandy got off of the ground and went over to the window to look out. Once again, the miner was nowhere in sight.
TAMARA (irked)- Oh, fu**ck these games. Come on, we're getting out of here.
MANDY- Tamara, no!!!
TAMARA- Mandy, I'm sick of this sh!t!
Tamara banged on the office's window with the hammer. Glass rained down to the floor.
TAMARA- Alright, Mandy, you go out first.
MANDY- Tamara, no!! This is a stupid idea!
TAMARA- Well, fine, stay in here by yourself.
MANDY- Alright, okay, I'll climb out.
Mandy scraped the remaining glass off of the windowpane. She lifted her leg up to climb out. When one of her legs was out of the window, she brought down the other one. All of a sudden, a gripping tug latched on to her ankles.
MANDY- NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The miner was pulling Mandy out of the office. Tamara quickly grabbed onto her shoulders and tried to pull her back in.
MANDY- No, please, don't let him get me!!
TAMARA- Just grab onto me!!
The miner's grip was tightening and he was determined not to let her go. Tamara's arms were turnign red and wobbly.
TAMARA- Let her go, you bastard!!!!
Mandy was sobbing.
MANDY- Tamara, please!!! Don't let me go!!!!! Don't let me go!!! I don't want to die, I don't want to die, I don't want to die, I don't want to die!!!
TAMARA- Mandy, just hold on!!
The miner snatched Mandy away from Tamara. The force sent Tamara flying backward. Mandy slapped and punched at the miner. He let her drop to the ground. She quickly got back up but the miner grabbed her shirt. He picked up a glass shard from the ground.
MANDY- Noo, let me go!!!!!!! Please!!!
Tamara reached her hand out of the empty window for Mandy.
TAMARA- Grab on to me!!!!!!!!!!
The miner thrusted the glass shard into Mandy's jaw. Blood sputtered from her mouth onto her shirt. He dug the shard in deeper and deeper and deeper. He snatched the shard out and half of Mandy's head fell to the ground. Her remains flopped to nothing. Tamara's voice was sinking further and further into her chest. She couldn't breathe and the tears were streaming down. The miner now had his full concentration on her. He swang the pickax through the broken window. The pickax caught hold of the front of Tamara's shirt. He pulled her closer and closer to him. Tamara grabbed her hammer and stuck into his arm as fast as she could. She stuck it in so hard that the miner let her go. Her shirt tore in pieces and she fell to the floor. Tamara let out a bloodcurdling shriek. The miner ran down the dark tunnel.
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Arash and Luke were sitting in the railcarts that were at the beginning of the mine. They had been there for a long time, and decided to rest. They had discovered that the wheels on the railcarts had been destroyed, so there as no way they could ride them back up to the surface. Joseph was looking at the control panel on the wall. He hadn't been there as long as Arash and Luke.
JOSEPH- Wow, someone really ripped this thing apart, too.
ARASH- Yeah, this sh!t is just perfect. Now, we're stuck down here.
JOSEPH- If those lights wouldn't have gone out, we wouldn't have got seperated and whoever it was wouldn't have done this.
LUKE- Joseph, it'll be fine. I'm glad you found us, but I am worried about those girls.
ARASH- Yeah, hopefully they all don't kill each other.
LUKE- But, this is so strange.. Who would trap us down here like this? We can't be down here all night. I'm sure my dad is looking for me by now..
Arash glared at Luke.
ARASH- Dude, who cares if he's looking for you? He's made up his mind, which means you're free to make up yours.
LUKE- Yeah, but, come on, Arash..
ARASH- Luke, you're staying over my house. If you go back over your dad's, there's no telling what will happen. He's said a million times that he's gonna stop drinking, but even that hasn't happened yet. Luke, I'm your friend and I'm not gonna let you put yourself in a situation like that.
LUKE- Arash, I can't crash over other people's houses for the rest of my life. I want something that is mine. I want to be able to sleep in my own bed for once.
Arash sighed. Joseph shut the control panel shut and walked over to the guys. He grabbed Arash's flashlight.
JOSEPH- I think we should go look for the girls.
All of a sudden, soemthing caught Joseph's eye. He shined his flashlight down the right tunnel.
ARASH- What? What's wrong?
JOSEPH (staring)- It's weird. I swear that I just saw someone standing down there.
Arash and Luke quickly rose out of the railcarts.
LUKE- It's probably the girls.
ARASH- No, it's probably the a$$hole who trapped us down here! Come on!
Arash, Luke & Joseph walked together down the long corridor. They ran all the way down and stopped before they got to the corner.
ARASH (whispering)- Is this where you saw him?
JOSEPH (whispering)- Yes, but why are we whispering?
ARASH (whispering)- Shut up, when he pops up again, we're gonna jump him!
LUKE- What?!
The guys waited. They heard footsteps approaching from around the corner. Arash grabbed the flashlight from Joseph and clutched it, tightly, preparing to strike. The footsteps were getting closer. Closer. Closer. Arash saw a shadow approaching. Arash and Luke jumped on at the guy who was walking. They tackled him to the ground.
ARASH- Who are you, you a$$hole???
The guy groaned and staggered up off of the ground. It was Eric.
ERIC (pissed)- What-the-fu**ck-do you think you're doing, you little blowhole??
ARASH- Eric?? What the hell are you doing down here? You weren't at the party! Hey, it's you who trapped us down here, huh? What the sh!t is your problem?
ERIC- What are you getting at, dumbass? I followed you guys down here so I could keep an eye on Liz.
LUKE- You mean, you've been down here this whole time?
ERIC- Yes, doofus.
ARASH- Well, we got a problem. No way out, no phone connection, and no girls. We don't even know where they are.
ERIC (livid)- Oh, come on!! That's just perfect! I knew something like this was gonna happen!
LUKE- Hey, man, it wasn't our fault. Someone's been running around here, busting all the lights.
ARASH- Well, what are we gonna do now?
ERIC- We're gonna find Liz and get out of here.
JOSEPH- There's two other girls, too.
ERIC- I don't give a flying fu**ck about them. I just need to get my sister. I can't believe you idiots would come down here in the first place!
ARASH- Says the guy who partied in the mine eleven years ago!
Eric raised his hand and grabbed Arash's shirt.
ERIC- Look, you little punk. Are we gonna sit here and argue all night or are we gonna get back to the surface?
ARASH, JOSEPH & LUKE (Rietjie-1 & StevieMC): You have a choice to make!
Should the guys:
A- Go with Eric to look for Liz
B- Don't go with Eric, look for Liz on your own
C- Stay by the railcarts to wait for the remaining girls to show up
Two equal death, one equals safety.
ERIC (WeBandofBuggered): You have a choice to make:
Should Eric:
A- Look for Liz down the left corridor
B- Look for Liz down the right corridor
One equals death, one equals safety.
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15 years ago
Scene thirteen
Arash threw his hands in the air and began storming down the corridor, away from Joseph, Luke and Eric.
LUKE- Arash, where do you think you're going?
ARASH- I'm going back to the fu**cking railcarts. You guys can go look for the girls but I'm gonna stay there in case any of them show up.
ERIC- Hey, genius, it's not smart to go off on your own.
ARASH (the smart ass)- I'm gonna be just fine. You guys just see if you can find them. If not, then meet me back here.
LUKE- Are you sure?
ARASH- Yeah, I'm positive. Now, go, we don't have the time to waste.
Arash turned away and walked back to the dead, resting railcarts. Eric, Joseph and Luke waled down a left corridor of the mine. Arash looked back towards them.
ARASH (to himself)- Please, there's no way I'm going anywhere with that weirdo Eric. I'm better off alone.
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Sheriff Chewie and the Mayor were walking out into the parking lot of the Valentine's Bluffs Police Station. The Mayor was puffing ona chunky cigar.
MAYOR- Sheriff, where do you even think the kids are throwing this party?
SHERIFF- I don't even know where to look first. But we gotta move quick. People's lives are at stake.
MAYOR- Well, it's obviously not at City Hall. We locked it up.
SHERIFF- And it can't be at the thrift store or anywhere in Town's Square because we would've heard them by now-
At that moment, a speeding sportscar came thundering into the parking lot.
SHERIFF- What the hell??!
The car stopped just inches from where the sheriff and the mayor were standing. A bunch of teenagers spilled out of the car and rushed over to the two of them.
SHERIFF- Are you kids out of your damn minds?! I oughta string all of you up right now for driving like that! What the hell is going on?
The sheriff and the mayor's surprise quickly turned into worry when they looked at the teen's faces. They were all exhausted and their eyes were frozen in fright.
KID 1- Sheriff, you- you gotta help us, man! We were having a party at the mines until a killer showed up!
KID 2- A guy is dead and there are a bunch of kids still in the mine tunnels!
The sheriff grabbed the kid by the collar of his shirt.
SHERIFF- There are kids in the tunnels??!!!?
KID 1- Yes! You gotta help them!
The sheriff pushed the kid away.
SHERIFF- All of you get back in the car and drive each other home now! Don't ask any questions! Just go, now!
The kids all quickly piled back into the sportscar. They revved the engine and drove out onto the road.
MAYOR- What are we gonna do now?
The sheriff pulled his walkie talkie out of his backpocket.
SHERIFF- This is Sheriff Chewie radioing in. I need every available officer to report to the Angel Mines. Come armed with all of the ammo you can get your fu**cking hands on. We don't know what to expect.
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Arash was throwing stones against the tin walls. He was going back and forth through his head. Did he make the right choice? Was he being too selfish to try and save himself? He didn't think he was. If he was really trying to save himself, he would've walked back up the railtrack to the surface. His thoughts muddled when he heard a thundering scream echo across the corridors. Arash turned around and saw the running, and bloody Tamara.
ARASH- Oh my God..
TAMARA (screaming)- HEEEELLLPP MEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ARASH- Oh my god, calm down!!
Tamara ran over to him.
TAMARA- You have to get us out of here!!!! We have to go, now!!!!!!!
ARASH- Why? What are you talking about?
TAMARA- There's a killer!! A miner!! He killed-he killed- oh nooooo......
ARASH (panicking)- Tamara, who?? Who did he kill? You gotta tell me!
TAMARA- Mandy and Maria are dead.
Arash's eyes widened.
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Eric, Joseph and Luke were walking along the corridor. It seemed to go on forever. White powder was all over the walls. This part of the mine had obviously been abandoned even before the accident years ago.
LUKE- What the hell is with this white stuff all over the walls?
ERIC- It's called chyme or some sh!t. It's supposed to contain explosions when the methane gas levels get too high in here. But the powder is old, and the mine is old so I doubt that it works anymore. If any of you were even to light a lighter in this bitch, we would all go up in flames.
JOSEPH- Are you serious?
ERIC- Yes, I'm serious. This place is way too damn dangerous. What kinf of brain dead asswipes would come down here to party anyway?
LUKE- Hey, man, how were we supposed to know that some weird sh!t was gonna happen?
At that moment, the three guys heard a familiar echoing sound. Footsteps.
ERIC- Hey, I hear somebody!! Come on!!!
Eric, Joseph and Luke followed the footsteps. They turned corner after corner after corner as the steps grew louder. Luke beamed the flashlight down the tunnels. Before the guys knew it, they ran into Liz.
ERIC (overwhelmed)- Liz!! Liz!!! Oh my god!!!
Liz's face was soaked in tears. She threw herself into Eric's arms and sobbed on his shoulder.
ERIC- I'm so glad that you're okay.
LIZ- Eric, it's been awful, just awful!! I got lost!! There was a killer after us! I don't know if Tamara, Mandy or Maria are still alive! Maria told me to run! We have to get out of here!
JOSEPH- I'm so glad we found you. I thought something happened to you.
LIZ (slowly panicking)- No, you guys seriously don't understand. There is a killer down here! We have to get everybody together and get out before he comes after us again!
All of a sudden, someone bumped into Luke and his flashlight fell crashing to the ground, turning off. The kids were in complete, vast darkness. Nobody could make out a thing.
LUKE- Oh come on!!!!!
LIZ- Okay, everybody, don't panic!! Just reach around the floor to find the flashlight!
Luke and Liz could hear rustling noises.
LIZ- Eric????? Joseph??!
No sounds were coming from Eric or Joseph. Just muffled sounds and rustling.
LUKE- Guys!!!!!!!! What the hell are you doing???
LIZ- Answer me!!! Eric!! Joseph!!
A moment of silence.
LUKE- Liz, grab a hold to my hand.
LIZ- Okay, hold on. Let me feel around for you.
Complete silence.
LUKE- Liz, grab a hold to my hand!!!
LIZ- Okay, Luke, I am holding your hand!!!!!
LUKE (nervous)- Liz...... No you're not.
Liz started sweating. Out of nowhere, a bright headlight beamed down at Luke and Liz. The miner was standing right in front of them and clutching Liz's hand. Liz screamed in fright.
LIZ- LUKE!!!! HELP ME!!!
The miner swang her to the ground, knocking her unconscious. The miner turned his attention to Luke.
LUKE- Oh my God!!! You bastard!!!
Luke started running down the dark corridor. The miner was hot on his trail. Luke grabbed rocks off of the ground and tossed them back at the killer. Few of the stones striked him in his head. The killer winced. Luke sprinted all the way down the hall, getting further from the killer. Luke found two huge hall doors at the end of the corridor. He kicked them open and flew inside. The room he was in actually had dim lighting. Luke grabbed boxes and boxes and shoved them in front of the doors to block the killer from getting in. Luke looked around the room. He was in the mine's shower and locker room. There were rusty white shower stalls everywhere. Luke knew he had to find a place to hide. Luke ran over to a shower stall and hid behind it. The shower's floors were full of dust and cobwebs. The shower room's doors began to violently vibrate. The miner was banging on the door from the outside. Luke stayed quiet in the shoer stall. He pulled the stalls' curtains back. The miner's pickax crashed against the glass of the doors, spiderwebbing them until the glass fell to pieces. The pickax rummaged the door open. Luke held his hand over his shaking mouth. The miner breathed heavily through the gas mask. He tore open each stall's curtain, seeing if anyone was inside. One by one by one by one. Luke's teeth started clittering. The miner swang the pickax into each stall's curtain, ripping them to nothing. One stall after the other. Luke grabbed a broken shower nozzle. It had a sharp end. All of a sudden, the miner tore open the curtains of Luke's stall, ready to strike. Luke sliced the nozzle into the miner's neck. The miner swang the pickax but Luke managed to get out of the way. The ax hit a water pipe and speeding water sprayed everywhere. Luke pushed the miner and the miner slipped on the water that was spraying on the ground. Luke ran deeper into the shower room. He found himself in the locker room half. He ran through the rows of lockers. He opened the locker doors. They were too small for him to fit. Luke started to panic. He could hear the miner's heavy breathing approaching. Luke looked around. He saw a huge vent on the wall in front of him.
LUKE- Yes!
Luke ran to the wall and started to pry on the vent's sheer frame. He finally tugged it loose. Luke rushed inside the vent tunnel and stuck the sheer frame back against the wall with his fingers. He lied down on his stomach. The cold vent tunnel sent shivers up his spine. He held on to the frame with all of his might and hoped that the miner wouldn't see him hiding inside. He saw the miner storming in the locker room, pushing locker rows to the ground. The miner stood right in front of the vent, looking around the room. Luke tried not to breathe as he saw the miner's legs two inches away from his nose. The miner gave up and walked out of the locker room. Luke listened closely. He didn't hear a thing. Luke started to push the frame off of the wall. All of a sudden, he heard a banging sound coming from behind him. The miner was inside the vent. He snatched Luke's ankle and pulled him further inside the tunnel. Luke kicked and screamed.
LUKE- Noooo!!!!!! Why are you doing this??!! What have I done??! Please!!
The miner swang the pickax at Luke but it hit the roof of the vent. Luke tried to crawl out of the vent but the miner grabbed Luke again. Luke stared the miner in his eye. Luke's eyes extended in surprise. He recognized who it was.
LUKE- Oh my god, you -
The miner sliced the pickax across Luke's neck. Luke choked on the blood coming out of his throat. He looked at the familiar eyes behind the miner's gas mask as everything started to go blurry. Luke's dead eyes remained in a cold stare at the miner.
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Arash and Tamara were running down the mine's tunnel. They each had a flashlight. They could hear water trickling from the ceiling but nothing else. It was almost as if theyw ere the only ones down there.
ARASH- Oh, come on, where the hell did everybody go that fast??
TAMARA- The killer could've got them, too!
ARASH- Not all of them. They left in a group.
TAMARA- Well, he came after us and we were in a group. Whoever this a$$hole is, he has balls.
ARASH (calling out)- Eric!!!!! Joseph!!! Luke!!!!!!!! Answer us!!!!!
TAMARA- This isn't right.
ARASH- What are we gonna do now?
The two of them walked deeper into the corridor. They didn't know it, but they were walking in the exact area where the kids had gotten attacked. Tamara looked at the ground. A broken flashlight was there.
TAMARA- Arash!! They must've been here!
Arash looked at the flashlight.
ARASH- Oh sh!t...
At that moment, Arash and Tamara heard moaning sounds.
TAMARA- What is -
They ran to the where noises were coming from. They found themselves in the long abandoned area of the mine, where the white powder littered the walls. At the side of the corridor, there was a room, where no door was covering it. Lights were coming from inside it, and soft music. An old song, "To Each His Own" by Al Martino was echoing from the room. Arash and Tamara walked cloer to the room and looked inside. Tamara's voice sank in her throat when she what was inside. The entire room was decorated in pink and red streamers, a disco ball hung from the ceiling, reflecting shimmers off of the wall. Thousands of candy hearts and roses were littered all over the ground. On the side of the room, sitting in chairs, were people tied up and gagged.
TAMARA- Oh my god, Arash-
All of a sudden, someone appeared and hit Arash in the head with a rock. Arash fell to the ground, unconscious. The person grabbed Tamara and hit her in the jaw with a clenched fist. Tamara suddenly fainted.
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15 years ago
Scene fourteen- the finale
Arash's eyes opened as the record spinning on the vinyl player began to fade out. His head was spinning as he rbeathed in the coarse air of the mine. He looked around. He was tied to a chair with thick, scratchy rope bound around his wrists.
ARASH- Help! Help! Get me out of here!
Tamara quickly awoke from the sound of Arash's screaming. She tried to move her hands but her wrists were stiffed with rope.
TAMARA- Oh sh!t! We're fu**cking trapped! How are we supposed to get the hell out of here?!!
ARASH- We're not. Somebody has plans for us.
The entire room was decorated like a dancefloor. Arash and Tamara were tied in chairs at the side of the room. Arash and Tamara gasped when they looked at what was sitting in the chairs beside them. The mangled, bloody corpses of Mandy, Parker, Maria and Luke were all slumped in chairs. They were all dressed in red and pink suits and dresses, faces full of heavy makeup and cups of punch lodged in their dead hands, along with plates of Valentine's heart cake sitting in their laps. Arash began to choke.
ARASH (in between hurling)- Maria!!! Luke- Noooo!!!! No!! No! You can't be dead!
TAMARA- Parker! No, Parker! Who did this to you?!
All of a sudden, Arash and Tamara heard approaching footsteps coming from the hallway. Their voices sank in their throats. Moments passed and finally Eric emerged from the dark hallway and into the room. His head had blood caked in it. Arash's face grew into a hateful frown. He knew it had been Eric all along.
ARASH- You bastard! I knew it! I fu**cking knew it! Look what you've done to my friends! You're a sick bastard!
TAMARA- Eric, please let us go!
ERIC (surprised)- Hey, wait a minute-
ARASH- What have you done, Eric?!
ERIC- You got it all wrong-
ARASH- What have you done with the others?
Out of nowhere, Eric was pushed into the room by a dull end of a pickax. Tamara and Arash's jaws dropped when they saw Liz and Joseph appear into the room.
ARASH- Oh, my God-
TAMARA- Liz? Joseph? No, not you ...
Liz pushed Eric into a chair and Joseph quickly started roping his arms to the chair.
LIZ- What's the matter, you two? Were we the last ones you were expecting? Don't worry...
Liz pointed at the corpses of the teenagers. She grinned.
LIZ- All of them thought the same thing! Ha ha!!
Joseph looked at Liz.
JOSEPH- Are these ropes tight enough, honey?
LIZ- Yeah, I suppose.
Joseph joined Liz and the two of them stood in the middle of the room, staring down the tied up victims.
ARASH- Liz, I don't understand! Why would you do this to everyone?
LIZ- All of you brought this on yourself! I'm only doing what I can to protect my family!
TAMARA- What?!
ERIC- Liz, what do you mean?
LIZ- I did this all for you, Eric. Ever since what happened with Harry Warden eleven years ago, after you lost all your friends and let your life go to hell, the family's fallen apart. Mom and Dad cry at every Valentine's Day because all they can think about is how you threw your life away. Then, all of a sudden, this sh!thole town wants to throw a dance again. The town was spitting in our faces! After all of the pain we went through, they just decide to throw a bash for every kid in town to get wasted and party. I tried to warn the mayor to cancel the dance. They still wouldn't listen. I even had Joseph kill the DJ for the dance, but somehow the dance still went on under the adult's noses. Well, not any more. This'll be the last time. Now, you all will see how to take other people's feelings into consideration.
ARASH- But, why Joseph? Why did you help her?
JOSEPH- Because Liz and I love each other. I would do anything for her.
LIZ (smiling)- That's right.
JOSEPH- My love for her motivated me to go after everyone. As long as I've been in this sh!tty, sleazy town, I never had a friend. All of you made fun of me every day at school. Every day around town, you made fun of me. You all made my life miserable. And you were making Liz's life miserable by throwing this party. So, all of you deserve this. You wanted a dance, well, you're gonna get it! Right here int hsi room. Too bad it's gonna be your last!
ERIC- Liz, how could you do this? You've killed all of your friends! There's no way you both will get away with this!
Liz stormed over to Eric.
LIZ (screaming)- What do you mean, there's no way we could get away with this?? Eric, let me bring you back for a minute. Who took care of you when you showed up at the front door all of those nights, drunk, out of your mind and nowhere to go? Who, Eric, who???!!!!?? So, now it's time for you to take care of me! Me and Joseph are gonna get rid of the last two a$$holes and then afterwards, we're going home! There's no evidence! We've made sure of that! No one will ever know!
ERIC- Liz, you can't do this! You just can't!
Arash and Tamara were loosening the ropes from around their wrists.
LIZ- Eric, you don't have a choice! I've done all of this for you and now you're gonna do what I say!
TAMARA- Liz, Joseph, please! You guys don't have to do this!
LIZ- Hmmmm, and you Tamara. You were supposed to die with Mandy and Maria. I could care less about the other two but I wanted you dead. You're a fu**cking spoiled bitch.
TAMARA- But I don't fu**cking deserve to die!
LIZ- Oh, please. Let me guess? Seeing your friends die have given you a change of heart? Well, it's a little too late for that now, don't you think? The both of you are the only ones left.
ARASH- Please don't do this to us! We won't tell anyone about this- I swear! We'll do anything!
Liz handed Joseph the pickax. Joseph laughed as he raised it in the air.
ERIC- No, Joseph! Don't Just stop!
Arash finally got the ropes loose and kicked Joseph in the face. Tamara loosend her ropes and lifted her chair and hurled it at Liz. Liz fell to the floor. Joseph dropped the pickax. Tamara began to untie Eric's ropes. Arash and Joseph were struggling with the pickax. Tamara got the ropes loose and Eric got up from the chair. Arash punched Joseph in the face and grabbed the pickax. Eric, Arash and Tamara ran out of the room. Liz picked herself up and staggered over to help Joseph off of the ground.
LIZ- Come on! We gotta get them back. They'll tell- They'll tell everyone!
Liz and Joseph stormed out of the room. The corpses stood still in the chairs.
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Eric, Arash and Tamara were running as fast as their hearts could take them. They were running down a corridor that was leading to a bridge over a large river of water in the mine. The bridge was a shortcut back to the railcarts.
ARASH- We have to go across this bridge! It's the quickest way to get us out of here!
The three of them finally approached the bridge that led to the other end of the mine. It was old and made out of rusty, wooden planks. It wobbled horribly. The three of them slowly moved across it.
TAMARA- Arash, what if we fall off of this thing? What if it breaks?!
ARASH- Just try not to look down, okay?!
Tamara couldn't help but look down. Lightyears beneath the bridge was a flowing river of deep water.
TAMARA- Oh my God-
All of a sudden, Liz and Joseph came thundering onto the bridge. Liz attacked Tamara and Joseph went after Arash. Eric was slipping and sliding off of the bridge.
ERIC- Liz! Stop!
Liz was choking a hold on Tamara's neck.
TAMARA (gasping)- Liz! Liz!
LIZ- DIEEE!!!!!
Arash swanf the pickax at Joseph. Joseph ducked. He punched Arash in the stomach. Arash groaned and fell on the wooden floor of the bridge. The bridge began to shake uncontrollably. Joseph ran over to Arash and looked down at him.
JOSEPH- Have a nice time below, Arash!
Arash grabbed the pickax and swang it up at Joseph. The ax lodged itself at the bottom of Joseph's chin. Joseph spit blood out. Liz pushed Tmaara aside when she saw.
LIZ- Joseph!!!! Joseph!!!
Arash snatched the pickax out of Joseph's chin and his body fell off of the bridge and into the rapid river below. Liz screamed in anger. She came charging at Arash but Tamara grabbed her by the hair. Liz elbowed Tamara in the chest. Tamara fell and Eric ran over and grabbed Liz.
ERIC- Liz, you can still give this up! You can stop now!
LIZ- No! They have to die!!!!!!!!!
ERIC- Liz, I won't you let you kill them!
LIZ- Fu**ck you, Eric!! You idiot!!!!!
The bridge began swaying hard back and forth. The ropes that held the bridge up were beginning to give in.
ERIC- Liz, please!!
Liz began charging at Arash and Tamara. The shaking bridge sent the pickax flying down into the water below.
ARASH - Fu**ck!!
Eric grabbed Liz. The bridge's ropes started to snap. Tamara and Arash rushed off of the bridge.
LIZ- NNNOOOOOOO!!!!!!
ERIC- No, Liz!
Tamara and Arash finally stumbled onto the ground away from the bridge. Eric and Liz screamed as the entire bridge snapped loose and fell hundreds of feet down into the cold river rapids. They were gone. Arash and Tamara let out sighs of relief. They embraced in a tight hug.
TAMARA- Oh my God, we got through it. We made it.
ARASH- It's over.
They breathed and let out their exhaustion. They listeend to the crashing waves of water beneath the mine.
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Arash began to stir. He could hear the sounds of people approaching. He opened his eyes. He and Tamara had fallen asleep in one of the railcarts at the center of the mine the night before. Now, it was morning and the sunlight from outside was penetrating into the mine. Arash stretched his arms and yawned. He saw the golden sunlight everywhere. He could hear the droves of police officers running down the railtrack. Arash sat up in the railcart so they could see him.
ARASH- Hey, over hereeeeeeeAAAAAAIEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
All of a sudden, the wall behind him expected and the old rotting corpse of Harry Warden, still in his miner's outfit broke out and grabbed Arash by the shoulders. Arash screamed at the top of his lungs. Tamara remaiend asleep. Harry drug Arash out of the railcart and began to pull him back into the wall.
ARASH- No! No! No! No! No! No! No! Leave me alone!!!!!!! LEAVE ME ALONE!!
Arash was sweating, tossing and turning. Tamara, the Mayor and Sheriff Chewie started rubbing him to calm him down.
TAMARA- Arash, it's alright! It's okay!
MAYOR- Calm down, son!
CHEWIE- You're safe now.
Arash opened his eyes. It was all just a bad dream. He was lying in a hospital bed in a shiny white hospital room. Tamara, the Mayor, Sheriff Chewie and a group of police officers were surrounding his bed.
TAMARA- How are you feeling, Arash?
ARASH- Alright, I guess. What happened?
CHEWIE- Well kid, me and my men were dispatched to the mine after some kids reported a murder. We found you and Tamara sleeping in the railcarts. There were bodies everywhere- a sadistic got damn massacre. You two were down in those tunnels all night. You're lucky to be alive. Liz and Joseph are dead. You and Tamara's parents are on their way.
TAMARA- Um, yeah, sheriff, sorry about the party and everything-
CHEWIE- No need to apologize for it now, young lady. The damage is already done.
MAYOR- Yeah, Tamara, it's all in the past. But from now on, things are gonna start changing around Valentine's Bluffs so I hope you two lived it up last night.
ARASH- Well, what about Harry?
MAYOR- Excuse me?
ARASH- Harry! Harry Warden! He jumped out of the wall and attacked me when you were about to rescue us!
Chewie looked around at the others. They all shook their heads in confusion.
CHEWIE- Harry Warden's skeleton has been buried in the mine for years, Arash.
ARASH- Then..... then he' s still there.
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An ambulance truck was driving down a long road on its way to the hospital. At the back of the truck, a paramedic was sitting next to Liz's body lying on a stretcher. He was chewing on a fat piece of gum and smoking a cigarette from his pack of Red Apple Tans.
PARAMEDIC- Such a beautiful girl.... what a waste. What a god awful waste.
The paramedic kicked back and opened up a magazine and began reading. Liz's hand began to twitch. The paramedic kept on reading. Liz's hand clutched a thick scalpel nearby. The paramedic finally heard the movements and set the magazine down.
PARAMEDIC- What the helll- AAARRRGGH!!!
Liz jumped off of the stretcher and buried the scalpel into the paramedic's chest. The paramedic bellowed in pain as she sliced deeper and deeper into his chest. His dead eyes rolled to the back of his head as she dug her hands in his chest and snatched out his fresh, plump heart. Blood oozed down her fingers. The driver of the ambulance truck heard all of the commotion.
AMBULANCE DRIVER- Hey! What's going on back there?
LIZ- Oh, nothing! Just taking care of business..
The truck rode on it's way into Valentine's Bluffs. Liz smiled crookedly.
FREEZE FRAME
TITLE CARD: THE END. PROPERTY OF GRINDHOUSE RELEASING, ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.
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15 years ago
THEATER SPECIAL DISCLAMIER
Hello everyone! Now it is intermission time! Now's the time for ice cream, hot dogs, potato crisps, chocolate bars, popcorn, and any other treat from our concession bar that you desire! Parents and kids can also take needed restroom breaks! Please note that our concession menu prices have changed:
Small popcorn - $ 2.75
Medium popcorn - $ 3.50
Large popcorn - $ 4.25
Jumbo popcorn - $ 5.50
* Beverage prices remain the same
French Fries - $5.00
Corn Dog- $ 1.75
Nachos- $6.25
Ice Cream- $4.00
Candy- Reeses, Hersheys, Snickers, Skittles, Jujubees, M&Ms, Mars, Sour Patch, Lemon Drops, Cheery Heads, Jawbeakers, Cotton Candy, etc-- $2.00 each
* Other remaining menu items still have the same price
We also would like to kindly ask audience members to restrain all smoking when second feature starts in progress. Intermission time is a proper time for smoking. Thank you!
FILMS ENDING TODAY
Black Lightning, Rated R
Blood Orgy of the She-Devils, Rated R
The Big Bust Out, Rated NC-17
Last House on Dead End Street, Rated X
Shaft, Rated R
Coffy, Rated R
Barbed Wire Dolls, Rated X
I Spit On Your Grave, Rated X
The Gore Gore Girls, Rated R
Caged Heat, Rated NC-17
Reform School Girls, Rated NC-17
Cannibal Holocaust, Rated X
Two Thousand Maniacs!, Rated R
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NOW is the moment every intermission fan loves!! It's PREVUE TIME!!!!!!!!! The following coming attractions:
LOLA AND THE DISCO DOLLS IN HOT SKIN, Rated X
THURSDAY THE 12TH, Rated X
OLD MACDONALD HAS AN AXE, Rated X
- will be playing at this theatre all next week! Enjoy the previews and if your friends aren't back in time by the time the previews, you better hurry and fetch them so they won't miss a minute of the awesome second feature! Enjoy!!
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15 years ago
--- TRAILER----
NARRATOR- Once a farmer had a farm...
A man walks outside. He looks up at the sky and gasps as a meteor falls in front of him.
NARRATOR- ...and on that farm, he had an axe...
The farmer walks over toward an axe stuck in a tree stump. He pulls it out with a grunt and turns toward the camera.
NARRATOR- ...with a chop, chop here...
Quick flashes of a group of friends in a minivan. The farmer walks into the road and slams the axe into the hood. The minivan turns, flipping over.
NARRATOR- ...and a chop, chop there...
Quick flashes of the minivan exploding with a girl still in her seat belt while her friends have gotten out.
NARRATOR- ...here a chop...
Quick flashes to a couple running hand in hand. The farmer comes out of nowhere and chops off the girl's hand. She screams before the farmer raises the axe and brings it down on the boy's head.
NARRATOR- ...there a chop..."
Quick flashes to a boy, holding onto his girlfriend.
Boy: I won't leave you--
The axe comes through one of the windows and slams into the back of the boys head, causing him to collapse onto the ground, dead.
NARRATOR- ...everywhere a chop...
Quickly flashes of the girl with one hand, screaming as she runs deeper into the woods. Two of her friend s are behind her, being mowed down by the axe wielding farmer.
NARRATOR- ...chop...
The girl with one hand, presumably the final girl, is crouching in the barn. As the farmer enters, all of the animals begins to make sounds. She begins to oink.
NARRATOR- ...once this farmer owned this farm...
Quickly flashes of the girl grabbing onto a garden hoe and slamming it into the head of the farmer. He goes down.
NARRATOR- ...E-I-E-I-O...
The girl collapses onto the ground, tired, only for the axe wielding maniac to sit up and turn to her.
TITLE CARD: Old McDonald Has An Axe Starring Kane Hodder as Old McDonald. Coming soon.
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15 years ago
----- TRAILER ----------
We see a slasher's point of view of a house's backyard in the night time. The kitchen door is open and the killer enters inside, unsheathing a bow and arrow. The killer walks all the way upstairs and pushes open a nedroom door, surprising two naked teenagers making out on the bed.
TEEN GIRL- Oh my God!
TEEN BOY- Oh, hey, we weren't doing anything-
The killer shoots the arrow at the boy's eye. The girl shrieks.
80'S TRAILER GUY VOICE- Weekends might seem like the perfect time to have fun, but not if the weekend falls on Thursday the 12th..
A girl is driving her car into a sleazy car wash at night time. The water and soap smoathers her car. She hears noises outside.
GIRL- Who the hell is that?
She looks through her windshield and screams as she sees the killer, who's dressed as a Navajo Indian.
GIRL- AAAHHH!!
80'S TRAILER VOICE GUY- .... Because 12 is a very unlucky number.
At a nearby campsite, a group of teenagers are gathered by the campfire.
TEEN BOY 1- Have you guys heard about Old Chief Woodenhead?
TEEN GIRL 1- Come on, don't freak everyone out!
TEEN GIRL 2- No, I wanna ehar!
TEEN BOY 2- Every Thursday the 12th, he goes after kids who don't believe..
TEEN BOY 3- That's bullsh!t!
Two teen camp counselors, a boy and a girl, are walking out of the camp's laundromat, holding baskets of laundry. Chief Woodenhead, the Indian Killer jumps inside a bulldozer and revs it up. The teens scream. He corners them and crushes them to death with the vehicle.
80'S TRAILER VOICE GUY & TITLE CARD- THURSDAY THE 12TH.
A pizza delivery girl walks up to a camp cabin and knocks on the door. No one answers. She bangs harder and the Indian Killer flings the door open. The pizza girl screams and gets hacked with an axe.
80'S TRAILER VOICE GUY & TITLE CARD- THURSDAY THE 12TH.
A guy is smoking a joint in the woodshed. The Indian Killer appears and shoves a knife down his throat, cutting out his tongue.
80's TRAILER VOICE GUY & TITLE CARD- THURSDAY THE 12TH.
A group of six teens are walking on a camp trail. The Indian Killer bursts out from underneath the ground with a chainsaw. The teens scream as they are buzzered to death.
80's TRAILER VOICE GUY & TITLE CARD- THURSDAY THE 12TH.
We see the final boy and girl running for their lives from the Indian Killer. They run to a lake and jump into a rowboat, wheeling themselves into the middle of the lake.
FINAL BOY- It's over now.
FINAL GIRL- We made it!
All of a sudden, the boat explodes and the Indian Killer emerges from the water with his ax raised as they scream.
80'S TRAILER VOICE GUY- Chief Woodenhead will get you on THURSDAY THE 12TH, the day when noone is safe.
We see a closeup of a white cardboard box in front of a black backdrop.
80'S TRAILER VOICE GUY- Due to the extreme sadistic violent blood and gore in "Thursday the 12th", all members of the audience will retrieve this one of a kind barf box at the theater, in case the film upsets your stomach.
---- END OF TRAILER-----
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15 years ago
---- TRAILER-----
We see a sleazy block in the middle of the Red Light District. A brunette hooker with killer legs, Lola is walking the strip. A fancy black car pulls up. The window rolls down, revealing a middle aged man.
MIDDLE-AGED MAN- You're a very sexy honey. I'll give you 1,00 bucks if you and me go back to my place.
LOLA- Alright, deal.
TRAILER ANNOUNCER- She was given an offer she couldn't refuse...
We see Lola and the middle aged man enter a bedroom. Four other men are there.
LOLA- Hey, what the hell is this?
MIDDLE AGED MAN- It's my party, baby!
LOLA- No, I don't do this! Take your money back!
MIDDLE AGED MAN- Not so fast sweet thing!
We see quick flashes of the five men tearing off Lola's clothes, throwing her on the bed, grabbing her hair, and Lola screaming.
Lola is pushed out of a car and into a dark alley, completely naked, a mess, and severely beaten.
TRAILER ANNOUNCER- Set up, violated, used and left for dead.
We see Lola knocking on a door. Two other gorgeous prostitutes, the blonde bombshell Pussy, and the brown raven haired Cherry hurry Lola inside. They clean Lola up and nurse her wounds.
CHERRY- Don't worry, lola, they'll neevr get away with this again.
PUSSY- As long as this silicone is swimming around in my tits, they'll never do this again.
CHERRY (sighing)- Jeez, Puss, this is a serious moment.
LOLA (venomous, angry)- I have to do something!
CHERRY- We'll see what we can do.
Lola, Cherry and Pussy walk into a suburban neighborhood. They kick down the door to a house. one of Lola's attackers, a married family man, is in the kitchen cooking grits. His eyes widen as he sees the three girls, dressed as sexy vigilantes.
MAN- Please, no, I didn't mean it-
Lola takes the pot of grits and flings it at his face, burning his face to muck.
Lola, Cherry and Pussy driving a Mustang in the middle of the desert, with a screaming man tied to the hood.
Lola pulling a hefty machete out of her bedazzled bra and shoving it into a screaming man's stomach.
TRAILER ANNOUNCER- See this hot and sexy film where men are only half men and women are more than all woman!
Pussy is on an elementary school bus. She is at the front, straddling the bus driver with a gun to his face and a hand on his crotch.
PUSSY- Get it up or I'll cut it off!!!!
The school bus kid scream.
We see Cheery with two pump action shotguns while taking a hot shower. She aims them at a peeping tom. KA-CHANK!
Lola, Cherry and Pussy standing on trucks with skimpy outfits on Thunder Road. They each raise a machine gun. An enitre crowd of hookers behind them raise their own machine guns. They've got an army.
The middle aged man is running in an old airport area. Lola flings a dagger at his head.
Cherry laughing at a group of football players she's tied up in her basement.
Pussy ripping the eye out of a man looking up her skirt.
TRAILER ANNOUNCER- Lola, Cherry and Pussy. These soft young girls would do anything for a man- or TO HIM!
We see Lola, Cheery and Pussy in tanks, short shorts and heels walking down a road in slow motion.
TITLE CARD: LOLA AND THE DISCO DOLLS IN HOT SKIN.
TRAIELR ANNOUNCER- Don't ever backtalk Lola and the Diso Dolls when they're in hot skin. You'll get naked lust that builds to a climax of death. Rated X for elongated sequences of graphic sexuality and gratuituous nudity, and sadistic torture and disturbing inappropate violence. Lola is Amanda Righetti. Cherry is Meagan Good. Pussy is Katie Cassidy. Coming soon.
----- END OF TRAILER----
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