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When Kitty gets shocked she lets out a scream. When she realizes her dress is snagged and getting pulled up she lets out a scream. But after that there are no more vocal screams/yells/yelps or moans. Would you add more vocal noise from Kitty as her dress is being pulled up? A BL with a German translation has added noise from Kitty as her dress is going up---like a distressing ooh ooh. Kitty has a lower pitched voice for a women and moans from her might be sexy and a added turn on with the audience laughter.

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I would most definitely add vocal noise from kitty, such as oh my god, what the hell!? Oh, oh no, somebody help me OMG! My dress! Oh god this is so embarrassing! My god the audience! Help please cover me! Than RRRRRIIIPPPPP!!!!

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was something I always thought was a great idea to add I
lines just like Robbie said

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Thanks Doug. Just like I think we all agree adding lines not only to kitty as her dress is being pulled upwards but also adding lines backstage from the women that were at her house would add a lot to the short. Engaging her in a conversation as kitty has the pole in her hand. “ oh my dear this must be a nightmare for you, so embarrassing” what will you do?” Than Kitty replies “ no one but none is going to make a fool out of my son” “I’m going to put a stop to this show right now, just you watch me!” “I’m going to get the last laugh here!”
Then 2 minutes later , an electrical shock followed by her undoing the grommet, sliding outward on her knees exposing her as she is desperately trying to yank spanky in, to her dress being violently ripped off over her head to the rafters!!

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You mentioned in the German BL version they added lines or noises made by Kitty after her dress is caught and she lets out with her yell. What sounds or lines were actually added?

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I have always thought that the scene where Kitty turns to the MC and says " They're laughing at him" should have had some more dialogue than the MC saying " Laughing at him they're howling at him" the mother then saying " I won't have my son laughed at Take him off" , Then the MC says " Take him off nothing he's the hit of the show" and Momma says " Well if you won't take him off I will" and of course the last " You can't break up that act " and the mothers says "Oh No". I always felt there should have been more lines from each the mother and the MC. I don't know what works people have agreed saying as many as more lines from each.

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I agree! I think the MC should have said your sons friends are making a flop of his shakesperian serious act and making a laughingstock out of your little darling spanky jr! Anyway the audience loves it and I as the MC will not disappoint!
Mother should have said something g along the lines of this is highly embarrassing for spanky and myself! I’m not going to just stand by and have my son and I humiliated like this! I’m mortified! Then have her run to get the pole. As she is struggling to hook spanky, they should have her saying don’t worry darling your mother is going to save you! No one but no one is going to make a fools out of the mcfarlands! Then her dres gets hookedw!

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It has been awhile since I watched the German version--it's on a hard drive 2 computers back. But the BL was dubbed with german voices and different sound effects. The woman's voice for Kitty was higher pitched and her noises were not clownish but more cartoonish. It was a panic oh-oh-oh. I didn't care for their sound effects especially since I've been listening to the original 50 years. It was Sig who posted a link to the German website to download it years back on the old IMDB BL

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