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another question

posted 4 years ago by doug78595 (107)
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if you were to increase the script and make this short an hour or better yet 2 hours what scenes would you add.

For me I would like to see them at the house a while earlier and then getting ready to leave to go to the theater.
another scene i'd like to see is the mother going to the Ritz theater where she signs him up
.I'd like to see many scenes increased so we cud see more of her getting stripped
I'd like to see what happens after how do they get her off the stage how do they give the prize does Daisy's mom offer friendship to Spanky's stunned mom?

[–] Robbie (249) 4 years ago

Good question! Yes I definitely would want to see them at the house getting ready, especially spankys mom, if I had it my way I would want to see her getting dressed, putting the slip on and picking the dress to wear, maybe asking spank, does mom look nice in this dress? Also would want to see more backstage comments and conversation with the women who were over at the house and yes see how she got off the stage and what she was saying if anything. Having Daisys mom put her arm around her half naked body would have been nice as she takes the prize money!there is so much you can do to this short to embellish it to the maximum and make it over the top erotic!

[–] spankyfan2 (124) 4 years ago

ALL good ideas boys!! If we were doing a version for Late nite Cinemax, how about having Daaisys mom put her arm around Kittys half naked body and escort her to the MC office--mild manner Daiseys mom just witnessed Kitty getting stripped and is quite excited!! She Tells the MC and grandma to give her 15-20 minutes to get Miss Kitty composed. Alone, Daisey mom starts some one on one--deep kissing, working her way down Kittys body, massaging now exposed breasts and Kitty keeps her dazed look until a smile appears on her face.
Another scene for late night--Kittys at the sewing machine and yells to Spanky--"mother can't hear you"--she then ponders and starts to worry about Spanky failing. She just told him she couldn't hear him, he flubbed his lines at the tea party and she guareented that Spanky was going to win the prize to ladies. Leaving Spanky at grandmas she heads to the theature early, comes across a door with a sign on it "JUDGES ROOM NO ADMITTANCE". She walks in quietly, closes door and locks it. She sees a man on the phone with his back to her. As he hangs the phone up, she slides her coat off and as he turns around to see who it is, Kitty quicky gets close to him. As He starts to say no one is allowed, she slides her hand through his hair and pulls him to her lips. She gives him some long wet kisses as her other hand massages a bulge in his pants and then slides the zipper down and pulls out a growing excitment. Kitty gets on her knees and goes to town on his member. After finishing she reminds him who she is and who her star son is and tellng this could happen again with a guarnateed win. Of course no problem he said. Kitty gathers herself puts her coat on and leaves. The man starts to leave out another door as the MC walks in--why are you smiling he asks--the man or stagehand says I think it going to be a good show.

[–] Robbie (249) 4 years ago

Awesome! Actually, Would love to see daisys mom and spankys mom get it on behind the curtains caressing one another’s breasts , kissing each other with spankys mom undressing daisys mom backstage while you still hear the audience roaring laughter! And than having the curtains raise upwards exposing them!
If I were the judge I would tell her that she must enter spanky at least one a week if not more because I need my member serviced often, if she wants to spanky to make a hit and win first prize. I would tell her girlie the dress is in the bag and then pull hers off in the privacy of my backstage office!