please watch a horror/comedy short i made

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5uAE5CWZUh4


So I made this little short to enter into a contest that I missed the deadline for. It was supposed to be a horror but ended up being kind of a comedy because of how ridiculous it was. Constructive criticism welcomed, but try to be nice it was my first "film." And I also shot and edited the ENTIRE thing on my iPhone 4S due to lack of money and technical difficulties. I think it came out pretty decent for an iPhone quality because of a film app I used call filmic pro. Anyways, I'd really appreciate it if you guys could give it a view!